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4/19/23, 4:25 AM
I love this! I love gooning. I hope we get to read more soon.
Takanashi
4/19/23, 3:57 AM
Amé cada uno de los párrafos, me gustaría leer más sobre está historia.
4/18/23, 7:38 PM
You have a phenomenal way with words. I’m so so happy you’re continuing this story and sharing it here. Such a big big fan! So eager for more!!! Very excited for potential emotional changes forced on his crush…maybe making the crush very mutual even though he’s presumably straight 😜

benedick543
4/19/23, 2:17 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Thank you so much! What I'm planning is that with every chapter, even as Fred uses MindX to control different people and aspects in his office life, he'll learn bits and pieces of information about Tom (he'll actually make a startling discovery in Chapter 3, which would push him over the edge to take action against his office bullies! lol), then eventually, well, we'll see what happens with their relationship lol Again, I really appreciate your feedback!

4/19/23, 2:49 AM
@[benedick543](/user/show/10034418) How exciting!!! I love that you have a nice roadmap for your story. Thoroughly impressed and excited for more. So much so that I’m feeling inspired to work more on my own!
Anonymous
4/19/23, 1:59 AM
Really wanna see how this ends!
Anonymous
4/18/23, 9:13 PM
Yess a continuation of the series :partying_face:

4/19/23, 1:39 AM
@Anonymous Thanks! I always planned to continue the truth or dare tale, I'd hoped that other members here might have added to this story too, or any one willing to try, it's open to add to for community members!
PussyDestroyer
4/19/23, 1:15 AM
Can’t wait for the next chapter! :)
Sep 28, 2021
4/16/23, 10:41 AM
This is an awesome work. I hope you give us a second part really soon :smile: Is Chad enhanced in some way? Like peach'd for studs or something?

4/19/23, 12:37 AM
@[Esper](/user/show/464795) Thanks! This is a stand-alone (I never even gave the main character a name), but I'll probably write more stories in this world at some point. I have at least one in drafts. While I didn't bother making it explicit, I did picture Chad being on an Eggplant equivalent of Peach for tops that makes him more hung.
4/11/23, 5:45 PM
Finally getting to my bookmarked story backlog, and this was right near the top of the list. Delightful stuff! Can’t wait to see where it goes :)

4/19/23, 12:32 AM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Hopefully chapter 10 doesn't take me another two years...
4/19/23, 12:00 AM
Definitely need more chapters
Anonymous
4/18/23, 6:08 PM
Love the more creative take on the writing here. Different from the previous installment of the series, but I like the more descriptive approach. Would love to see Fred toying with his bosses too!

benedick543
4/18/23, 6:15 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I was getting more comfortable with erotic fiction writing so I wanted to be more "literary" with the sequel. And noted on your suggestion! I currently have 3 more chapters written out and still finalizing, and I'm still mapping out the rest of the story, so I'll try to incorporate your idea about the bosses as well!