Recent Comments

4/11/23, 5:45 PM
Finally getting to my bookmarked story backlog, and this was right near the top of the list. Delightful stuff! Can’t wait to see where it goes :)

4/19/23, 12:32 AM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Hopefully chapter 10 doesn't take me another two years...
4/19/23, 12:00 AM
Definitely need more chapters
Anonymous
4/18/23, 6:08 PM
Love the more creative take on the writing here. Different from the previous installment of the series, but I like the more descriptive approach. Would love to see Fred toying with his bosses too!

benedick543
4/18/23, 6:15 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I was getting more comfortable with erotic fiction writing so I wanted to be more "literary" with the sequel. And noted on your suggestion! I currently have 3 more chapters written out and still finalizing, and I'm still mapping out the rest of the story, so I'll try to incorporate your idea about the bosses as well!
4/18/23, 4:43 PM
This is the kind of stuff that turned me gay...
4/18/23, 4:39 PM
Well, this just hit every single mental kink _I_ have, that's for sure.
Anonymous
4/18/23, 2:29 PM
Nice! real curious where Fred’s relationship with Tom will go

benedick543
4/18/23, 2:36 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! I plan on fleshing the Tom/Fred relationship in a future chapter, but for now, I want to focus first on Fred exploring and controlling different aspects of the office!
Anonymous
4/18/23, 2:13 PM
Damn, this story is so hot! The part where the guys eat their food covered in cum was *chef's kiss* (pun intended lol) can't wait for the revenge chapter!

benedick543
4/18/23, 2:32 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! And yeah, that's one of my favorite parts I've ever written too! The revenge chapter will be coming soon, just finalizing some details and get on with proofreading!
Elm
4/18/23, 1:50 PM
That was great! Loved the daddification! It would be even better if Tim was more in control, but to each their own haha.
4/18/23, 1:16 PM
I think that was so much fun. the edging element was just fantastic. I love your storytelling.
4/17/23, 6:46 PM
Wow great work

4/18/23, 6:06 AM
@[Clinton J](/user/show/2616233) Thank you! This was my first story so I'm glad someone enjoyed it.

4/18/23, 1:01 PM
@[Frank Richie](/user/show/909640) even more impressive that it is your first story.