Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/18/23, 2:29 PM
Nice! real curious where Fred’s relationship with Tom will go

benedick543
4/18/23, 2:36 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! I plan on fleshing the Tom/Fred relationship in a future chapter, but for now, I want to focus first on Fred exploring and controlling different aspects of the office!
Anonymous
4/18/23, 2:13 PM
Damn, this story is so hot! The part where the guys eat their food covered in cum was *chef's kiss* (pun intended lol) can't wait for the revenge chapter!

benedick543
4/18/23, 2:32 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! And yeah, that's one of my favorite parts I've ever written too! The revenge chapter will be coming soon, just finalizing some details and get on with proofreading!
Elm
4/18/23, 1:50 PM
That was great! Loved the daddification! It would be even better if Tim was more in control, but to each their own haha.
4/18/23, 1:16 PM
I think that was so much fun. the edging element was just fantastic. I love your storytelling.
4/17/23, 6:46 PM
Wow great work

4/18/23, 6:06 AM
@[Clinton J](/user/show/2616233) Thank you! This was my first story so I'm glad someone enjoyed it.

4/18/23, 1:01 PM
@[Frank Richie](/user/show/909640) even more impressive that it is your first story.
Apr 16, 2023
4/18/23, 12:57 PM
Nice matzah balls!
Martin
4/17/23, 9:41 PM
I guess the heavy focus on a straight relationship is putting off a lot of readers here, but your writing is impeccable as you've proven in your other stories. And the sexual tension between the man and the boy is extremely tangible. The ending is really surprising and heavy, I wonder where this is heading. Please don't let the slow reaction on that first chapter keep you from posting the remaining chapters!

CasualWanderer82
4/18/23, 8:45 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you for the boost! I'll post soon. I'm actually really proud of how this story as developed.
CasualWanderer82
4/18/23, 8:42 AM
Thank you ALL for the positive feedback!
4/18/23, 8:38 AM
What a nice guy to find at the gym and what a cool formula. I loved the uncertainty about whether he was being underhanded or not but really helping our friend out. Great job. That'll give him a leg up on his training.
4/18/23, 7:23 AM
A dynamite slow burn classic hypno story. Would have loved to see what happened next!