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4/16/23, 11:17 AM
This part is pretty cute. I'm really looking forward to the sequel. I especially like how Skippy and Sparky spend time together. By the way, I have a questions for this fanfic if I may ask: 1. Why is Sparky an adult baby for Titan and his pack? 2. It seems that in one part it was said that he goes to school. What school does he go to? 3. Do all the characters in all parts wear dog masks or do they sometimes take them off? 4. I didn't quite understand Sparky's age and what he looks like. Can you describe it to me in detail? Or show a picture if possible? 5. Tinan, Bright, Oak, Nyx, Sparky, Ruby, Skippy. What do these names mean? I have nothing against. Just wondering. 6. Do the rest of the pack have the same bad backstories as Nix and Skippy?

4/16/23, 1:46 PM
@[Bright Dream🏳️‍🌈](/user/show/10028726) 1. That’s just his fetish. We will explore his backstory soon enough. 2. I never really specify simply because I don’t wanna draw an accidental parallel to a real school. Just like how it’s briefly mentioned Titan is a history professor but I’m likely never gonna give a name. 3. They go off and on. I will try and specify when. Sparky has his on fairly frequently and is not allowed to take it off. 4. Sparky is about about 5’6 and weighs around 160. He’s very trim but has some minor muscle definition. He is fairly hairless from the neck down just naturally like some guys are and shaves around his crotch and pits. He had a tattoo on his left leg that’s a reproduction of a drawing he made. I’ll go more into it later. As a general rule of thumb I don’t describe a characters skin color or racial heritage so readers can insert whatever they want the characters to be. For instance in my head Titan is a very tall caucasian/African American man. With short cut, black/brown hair and a decent pelt of chest hair. And a big dick. To others he could be a tall muscular white dude. Or middle eastern. Unless I’m writing about a specific person I know or have a design in mind for I tend to avoid finer details like skin color and such outside of minor things like hair or eye color, and that’s only for scene setting. 5. Nothing lol. I just liked them and felt they kinda fit haha. No ulterior motive. Pup names are what you want. For a while I considered naming them all after gems or minerals and having the pack name be something geology themed. 6. Well not quite. Those are just the most impactful. Hearing “la la I had a wonderful childhood and everything was peachy” does not really add much to character development or story progress. Everyone has their demons. And those will be explored. Nyx is probably the worst we will get into (probably unless I have a really good idea…which I might). Hope that helped.

4/17/23, 5:08 AM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Thanks for answering. I was just curious. To be honest, I like your puppy play and diaper fanfics.
4/17/23, 4:56 AM
What a great story so far. Jerked to every chapter. Hope the next Sir is a fat and hairy trucker hehe. Love it.
4/16/23, 2:59 PM
LOVING!

4/17/23, 1:35 AM
@[Kelly](/user/show/933626) Thank you ❤️❤️
Anonymous
4/16/23, 5:45 AM
ONE OF MY FAVE STORIES IS BACK YESSS

4/17/23, 1:35 AM
@Anonymous Yay I'm glad someone's still reading!
4/16/23, 1:16 AM
Great follow up, buddy!

4/17/23, 1:34 AM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Thanks Plymouth :)
4/16/23, 8:41 PM
Was not expecting this story to ever be continued. Huh. Maybe a bit light on story, even if we do get some explanations as to what is happening and some very creative take on someone using another's mind-controlled puppets. Stil, very hot and the quality level we're used to coming from you, with one exception: "At the sound of the word ‘Nestslut’, his Nestor stood ramrod straight - a military salute that I’m sure he perfected after years as the son of a no-nonsense cop, detective, then sergeant." ???? Why the token first-person moment? 'his' Nestor? The whole line feels like it comes from a prior draft. Good to explain what's up, but I was taken out og the story as i had to re-read the line to be certain of what I just read. =(

4/17/23, 1:32 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks for pointing that out! Changed :)
Dec 15, 2013
4/17/23, 12:30 AM
The sex scenes are absolutely the best part of these stories. Just so very well done, and so subversive too. I just wish someone kind would head in and fix the many, many typos. These stories deserve some loving care.
4/16/23, 10:05 PM
Great story mate! Congrats.
4/16/23, 10:03 PM
can't belive I hadn't noticed the upgrades the series received since december. :sweat_smile: Not sure if I ever commented for this series before. but it's one of my favorite still-ongoing work. =) Really enjoy the turns the story take and the variety as two group of mind-controllers try to one-up each other!
Anonymous
4/16/23, 9:33 PM
I'm with Devil, it's all about the struggle :smiling_imp: no struggle = no fun I do kinda dig the odd couple thing going on between him and Hero though.