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Anonymous
5/21/25, 5:44 AM
This sounds naughty
5/21/25, 7:41 AM
Wow! i love mind control stories, and this particular story was so hot it didn't just blow my mind! i love the idea of hypnosis and hypnotic triggers. Having the ex-boyfriend and hypnosis Master show up and take control of the household by using their own hypnosis practice against them is incredibly hot. My only problem with this author is his love of writing very short stories. When i love a story as much as i love this one, i have to have more. Unfortunately i can see from his other stories that they are all only one short chapter. :((
Anonymous
5/21/25, 11:46 AM
did he already vape before? or did that happen as a result of whatever made him smoke the cigar and then seem to like it a lot?

5/22/25, 8:08 PM
@Anonymous Yeah, he would've vaped before, but ut doesn't play a huge part in the story. It was just to flesh out his character a bit more. Thanks for reading.
5/21/25, 12:37 PM
This is a WINNER. I loved it. your tenderness in your writing is very relate-able. THANK YOU.

5/23/25, 7:25 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank _you_. I really enjoyed writing this story and this kind of response really means a lot.
2/4/25, 3:23 AM
Amazingly hot, man. Have you ever thought about writing and directing your own gay porn movies. You could make an empire. On a side note, I hope you continue developing a new story line centered on the two cops that fucked the horny boy in the park, with their own juicy dynamics of power and mentorship -brotherhood bro sex. All the best.
5/21/25, 2:14 PM
Is Rebecca Morris the same as Jack Palmer's Rebecca in "Attention Whore"?
May 19, 2025
5/21/25, 3:07 PM
Very hot, thanks! I love scenarios involving dads dominating their sons!
5/21/25, 4:36 PM
Loving the chapter, I hope there is more seemingly unrelated cases that creates more of web of conspiracy. I love the atmosphere and intrigue to it. Keep it up.
May 19, 2025
ChicagoFit02
5/21/25, 5:58 PM
Hot asf, love your stories man. Waiting for chapter 2!
5/21/25, 5:59 PM
Would love to read the next chapter