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4/16/23, 1:16 AM
Great follow up, buddy!

4/17/23, 1:34 AM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Thanks Plymouth :)
4/16/23, 8:41 PM
Was not expecting this story to ever be continued. Huh. Maybe a bit light on story, even if we do get some explanations as to what is happening and some very creative take on someone using another's mind-controlled puppets. Stil, very hot and the quality level we're used to coming from you, with one exception: "At the sound of the word ‘Nestslut’, his Nestor stood ramrod straight - a military salute that I’m sure he perfected after years as the son of a no-nonsense cop, detective, then sergeant." ???? Why the token first-person moment? 'his' Nestor? The whole line feels like it comes from a prior draft. Good to explain what's up, but I was taken out og the story as i had to re-read the line to be certain of what I just read. =(

4/17/23, 1:32 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks for pointing that out! Changed :)
Dec 15, 2013
4/17/23, 12:30 AM
The sex scenes are absolutely the best part of these stories. Just so very well done, and so subversive too. I just wish someone kind would head in and fix the many, many typos. These stories deserve some loving care.
4/16/23, 10:05 PM
Great story mate! Congrats.
4/16/23, 10:03 PM
can't belive I hadn't noticed the upgrades the series received since december. :sweat_smile: Not sure if I ever commented for this series before. but it's one of my favorite still-ongoing work. =) Really enjoy the turns the story take and the variety as two group of mind-controllers try to one-up each other!
Anonymous
4/16/23, 9:33 PM
I'm with Devil, it's all about the struggle :smiling_imp: no struggle = no fun I do kinda dig the odd couple thing going on between him and Hero though.
4/16/23, 9:30 PM
Looking forward to seeing which option the bad Doctor Hart chooses... I'm hoping they stay swapped too.
4/16/23, 1:12 PM
Very funny twist! I'm not sure if turning a few gay white Iowans into black men would really help improve race relations in Des Moines, but who am I to question the Wisdom of Blaenoriad.

Willie Cici
4/16/23, 8:44 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Wait till they go to Arizona!!
4/16/23, 12:52 PM
That was fun! I wanna go to that party.

4/16/23, 8:31 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks man, I'm really pleased you're comin' on the journey. Hope you enjoy and DM me or comment on any story for things you'd like to see in the future
Anonymous
8/19/19, 2:42 PM
Excellent. A little more development would make it better. Loved the idea!

4/16/23, 8:30 PM
@Anonymous Hope you enjoy the reworked version to answer your comment from 2019 :)