Recent Comments

4/16/23, 1:12 PM
Very funny twist! I'm not sure if turning a few gay white Iowans into black men would really help improve race relations in Des Moines, but who am I to question the Wisdom of Blaenoriad.

Willie Cici
4/16/23, 8:44 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Wait till they go to Arizona!!
4/16/23, 12:52 PM
That was fun! I wanna go to that party.

4/16/23, 8:31 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks man, I'm really pleased you're comin' on the journey. Hope you enjoy and DM me or comment on any story for things you'd like to see in the future
Anonymous
8/19/19, 2:42 PM
Excellent. A little more development would make it better. Loved the idea!

4/16/23, 8:30 PM
@Anonymous Hope you enjoy the reworked version to answer your comment from 2019 :)
4/16/23, 7:33 PM
I like where this is going. Expected to see someone with the identity of devil to have his cock out and sheathed.
4/16/23, 7:28 PM
Well that's 3 days of edging down the drain. 😆
Nov 26, 2020
4/16/23, 7:09 PM
This was amazing! The writing was great, but I am so curious about the mythology stuff. Do people really worship this way? Does this stuff only happen in Pittsburgh or are there gay sex cults all over the place? Asking for a friend!
4/16/23, 6:54 PM
incredible. Exceptional. Amazing writing.
4/16/23, 5:56 PM
This series has a lot of potential so far. The MC aspects have been very downplayed, but sometimes I like it when they are secondary to a story, rather than the focus. Independent of those, this is still a very good story that seamlessly blends found family tropes and poly-adjacent fun around a poignant core of sexual self-discovery. Bravo so far, and eager to see what comes next!
4/16/23, 4:24 PM
Great concept and writing , love how the transformations take place
Apr 16, 2023
nycboot
4/16/23, 3:56 PM
I detest smoking of any kind, but since I know the neighborhood, I had to keep on reading. :smile: Perhaps next year you can riff on the line "we were slaves in Egypt..."