Recent Comments

4/16/23, 6:54 PM
incredible. Exceptional. Amazing writing.
4/16/23, 5:56 PM
This series has a lot of potential so far. The MC aspects have been very downplayed, but sometimes I like it when they are secondary to a story, rather than the focus. Independent of those, this is still a very good story that seamlessly blends found family tropes and poly-adjacent fun around a poignant core of sexual self-discovery. Bravo so far, and eager to see what comes next!
4/16/23, 4:24 PM
Great concept and writing , love how the transformations take place
Apr 16, 2023
nycboot
4/16/23, 3:56 PM
I detest smoking of any kind, but since I know the neighborhood, I had to keep on reading. :smile: Perhaps next year you can riff on the line "we were slaves in Egypt..."
Apr 16, 2023
4/16/23, 3:49 PM
As a Jew who has been talking about wanting a Sedar based story on this site, i approve. Look, it might be incest, but at least they're both dating a good Jewish boy. As long as one of them has a good job, I'm sure their parents will approve. (I'll send their Bubbeh my family's passover brownie recipe.)
4/16/23, 3:35 PM
Damn, the fight he put up and the slow slide into it was hot. Honestly just wish we had gotten a bit of a longer, more drawn-out sex scene at the end since the sex we did see was pretty hot. Thanks for sharing, looking forward to more of Simon's conquests!
4/16/23, 3:32 PM
is there gonna be a new chapter?
Omar
4/16/23, 1:53 PM
This is so good I hope he gets even hairier
Lampshade15
4/16/23, 1:33 PM
Oh my god, this is the hottest thing I've read in a while. I love daddies and the idea of men turning into them. It's even better when there's a subby little bottom molding a man into his dream dom daddy. It's such a turn-on when the sub is the one who is actually in control, manipulating things from behind the scenes. Really can't wait until the next chapter!
4/16/23, 1:25 PM
I love your stories so much and this new one is just PERFECT! Thank you so much for writing stories in the “dumb jock” genre. These are my favorite stories ever and I will never not want more and more stories just like this one and Brocurious. Can’t wait for more, man!!! Thank you!!