Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/16/23, 8:05 AM
This is awesome! Super hot - can’t wait to read more.
4/16/23, 7:22 AM
TPE can be really hot if it works well for both Dom and sub. For me the level of control is hot, but is more than offset negatively by the brutality and apparent lack of empathy Marcus shows for Tony. When Marcus's dark side is made very apparent, the story became more of a horror story. It will be interesting to see in the next chapters if Marcus has any redeeming intent or character. I certainly don't see how he can make this up to Tony. I suppose it is good when appeal for this kind of behavior and outcome can be fully assuaged by our reading fiction. Hopefully we don't act it out in real life.
Apr 15, 2023
Martin
4/15/23, 3:10 PM
Thank you for publishing your story! I've cut down on the tags a bit. Please only add tags related to the chapter they're assigned to. If you plan to use additional themes in later chapters, add the tags to the chapters which they're appropriate to, only. Thanks!

4/16/23, 5:38 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks
Anonymous
4/16/23, 5:15 AM
I love the direction this story is going, I can’t wait to read more!
Sebastián Apollo
4/16/23, 3:53 AM
What a fun read! I'm not familiar with the other hijinks of Amir and Manny, so this is definitely a good introduction that's just tempting me to see what else you've come up with. Thanks for sharing, and keep up the good work!
4/16/23, 3:22 AM
Yes! The further adventures of Amir & Manny. Love it!
4/14/23, 9:02 AM
Excellent work!I read this three times and noticed that coffee could make the emission of Courage caffeined. Does that also mean Dr D make Courage’s cum ego-altering by spiking his tea and since he drink so much cum that he inadvertently change his own ego(become less evil)?

4/16/23, 2:08 AM
@[goodpuppy](/user/show/10023640) Thanks! Yes, Dr. Darkness sets up his own downfall here by trying to poison Courage with caffeine, not realizing specifically what it does in this universe.
4/13/23, 12:13 AM
I'm sad to hear about your job, but I really am glad you're back! This story looks intriguing and I like the limitless theme that hides there. I really like your attention to detail, specifically with the names of the function that the... device(?) uses. I want to say that as usual I can't wait for the next chapter, but your health and stability come first. So take as much time as you need. I hope things will get better soon...

4/16/23, 2:07 AM
@Reader Thanks! I usually end up writing wacky scenarios, but I like having a logical in-universe reason. A little silly to have your boss suddenly naked and horny, but that's what mad science nudity lasers do!
4/13/23, 12:57 AM
I'm sorry to hear about your job! I hope that everything works out for you. Please do what you can do to take care of yourself, in the meantime I really liked the inversion going on here where Diego has somehow gotten smarter because of silly plot reasons. You always come up with the best premises! The conversation about ethics really made me laugh, too

4/16/23, 2:05 AM
@[gargayle](/user/show/10018766) Thanks! I've had ideas for flipping the usual "fucked dumber" trope for a bit now, this just happens to be the first one that hit the page.
4/13/23, 8:25 AM
I’m absolutely enthralled

4/16/23, 2:04 AM
@[Bound_Up_Boy](/user/show/907887) Thanks!