Recent Comments

Lampshade15
4/16/23, 1:33 PM
Oh my god, this is the hottest thing I've read in a while. I love daddies and the idea of men turning into them. It's even better when there's a subby little bottom molding a man into his dream dom daddy. It's such a turn-on when the sub is the one who is actually in control, manipulating things from behind the scenes. Really can't wait until the next chapter!
4/16/23, 1:25 PM
I love your stories so much and this new one is just PERFECT! Thank you so much for writing stories in the “dumb jock” genre. These are my favorite stories ever and I will never not want more and more stories just like this one and Brocurious. Can’t wait for more, man!!! Thank you!!
Anonymous
4/16/23, 1:21 PM
You had me at cigars and cops!!
Apr 16, 2023
Lampshade15
4/16/23, 1:04 PM
Hot story, love a dom bottom too! The only thing is we can't see what Ben looks like, the picture's been removed.
4/16/23, 12:33 PM
DANG! This was just fantastic. I was so charged! I just loved the persuasion and the resistence. THANK YOU for your excellent story tellling. Simon and his eyes. WOW! so hot.
4/16/23, 10:13 AM
I Hope some of the guys transform into demons 🤤
Anonymous
4/16/23, 8:05 AM
This is awesome! Super hot - can’t wait to read more.
4/16/23, 7:22 AM
TPE can be really hot if it works well for both Dom and sub. For me the level of control is hot, but is more than offset negatively by the brutality and apparent lack of empathy Marcus shows for Tony. When Marcus's dark side is made very apparent, the story became more of a horror story. It will be interesting to see in the next chapters if Marcus has any redeeming intent or character. I certainly don't see how he can make this up to Tony. I suppose it is good when appeal for this kind of behavior and outcome can be fully assuaged by our reading fiction. Hopefully we don't act it out in real life.
Apr 15, 2023
Martin
4/15/23, 3:10 PM
Thank you for publishing your story! I've cut down on the tags a bit. Please only add tags related to the chapter they're assigned to. If you plan to use additional themes in later chapters, add the tags to the chapters which they're appropriate to, only. Thanks!

4/16/23, 5:38 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks
Anonymous
4/16/23, 5:15 AM
I love the direction this story is going, I can’t wait to read more!