hot!!! when Justin was wearing the superboy costume and Connor was naked being called a bad boy, it would have been hot if Justin pulled Connor over his knee and started spanked him and teasing his pussy.

Just read the most recent comment and realized I never submitted a rating. Shame on me. Fixed! Now, the important bits: I too vote for choice 3 but maybe with complications. Like maybe Gerald turns out to be away for a period of time so Noah can’t get in touch right away. Meanwhile Danny is desperate to be fed. I don’t like choice 2, but maybe Noah has to take him to a club or gloryhole so he can get his “fix” until Gerald returns. As far as the dilemma of what Danny shot all over the floor ( and Noah), maybe Noah can collect enough of the residue to convince Danny and get his original personality back. Name? There are several I could suggest. Did Danny have a middle name? Personally, I like Ethan.

For what it's worth, I enjoyed the story, I like the prospect of phase 2 being receptive to the urges of the consumer and not just being meathead juice. I'm interested in the plot lines for both schoolkid and Mr Matt, they have different needs from phase 2. Please share their journeys with us ☺️

Oh, Jack, you know how to keep me coming back to you.

extraordinary, super hot, the offer to be the whore of Justin's entire team... but the wait is desperate my friend... :star_struck:

This is just excellent. Hits all my notes. Thank you! Can't wait for more.

"PT With the Coach" is awesome! When I read this passage my cock got hard like a battering ram and I had to stop reading and shoot a load: He was owned by the Team. He did belong to the Team. He obeyed Coach. He served the Team. He served Coach. It's so hot that you get what real masculinity is all about: being a totally committed member of a team of jocks or cops or soldiers or other masculine professions. What I call "Team Masculinity". My own personal beliefs pretty much echo everything you wrote in your story. Here are some passages from a little document I keep modeled after the "Meditations" of Marcus Aurelius that I call my "Meditations on Masculinity": All masculine men want to be owned. All masculine men need to be owned. All masculine men crave to be owned. Even if they don't realize any of this. In fact, most men don't realize any of this. All masculine men want to obey. All masculine men want to serve. All masculine men want to be of use. All masculine men want to be used. All masculine men need to be used. Even if they don't realize any of this. To satisfy all these needs all masculine men need a team. All masculine men want a team they can belong to. All masculine men want a team they can be owned by. All masculine men want a team they can be loyal to. All masculine men want a team they can serve. A masculine man's team is his one true family. A masculine man's team identity is his one true identity. A masculine man's team life is his one true life. A masculine man's true purpose in life is to be part of the team and be owned by the team and serve the team and live for the team. A masculine man has no individual identity. His one and only true identity is his team identity. A masculine man's one and only and true purpose in life is to embody Team Masculinity, which is the one and only and true Masculinity. True masculinity is Team Masculinity. Team Masculinity is the masculinity of the US Marine Corps, of college wrestling teams, of State Troopers, of firefighters, of football or baseball or hockey or soccer or rugby players. A masculine man has no function outside his team, no purpose outside his team, no life outside his team, no meaning outside his team, no existence outside his team. His Universe is his team. Hopefully the above gives you an idea why your story was such a turn-on for me. I hope you'll be publishing a lot more stories with similar themes and similar passages.

The first part is hot and sad for me. I am curious of the “taken care of” Jeffrey is talking about.

Great story. I hope there will be more chapters coming.

Is anyone else wondering whether Neil just got force-fed an overdose of the juice, or if just maybe the trainer's room had an intensive "training" video and soundtrack? 🤔😵‍💫 Wonderful story! I've finished the series, just wanted to put this comment with this chapter. If there was just a bit of self-awareness of what was happening on their part, I'd have given it five Mind Control stars. I'd love to see some internal wrestling between their growing muscle lust & gainz and the cost (I'd pay the cost happily, myself)... But even without that, it's a HOT story!