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Jun 2, 2020
4/14/23, 12:54 PM
Really cool story! Maybe a bit too much descriptive, but given the fact I find some writers don't describe enough, I can't complain. :sweat_smile:
4/14/23, 12:42 PM
Fun start, I am however staying on the fence about what will happen after, if sequel there is. Not sure where it could go with a literal *god* as the main character.
4/14/23, 3:31 AM
I loved the idea of this and the turnabout as a fairy tale. Really amusingly done!

4/14/23, 12:40 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you. I tried to mix it up with different types of themes in all my stories. If you enjoy the ones posted here, check out my e-books on Amazon.
8/2/22, 6:32 PM
I wish the man dressed all in black would come for me.

Anonymous
4/14/23, 12:22 PM
@[xboi](/user/show/10027140) Me too
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
7/4/20, 4:12 AM
Wish this would happen to me one day, oh well.

Anonymous
4/14/23, 12:22 PM
@Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com Me too
4/14/23, 12:20 PM
I like Chad! WELL played my jock friend!
7/5/21, 8:51 AM
I love the devolvement of Luke throughout the series. But I wish the story wasn't so focused on the interracial aspect. an interracial relationship doesn't need to always be focused on the fact of it being interracial. seemed like Black people were often being stereotyped or fetishized throughout the story.

7/6/21, 10:07 AM
True, but it's an erotic story, so it goes with the territory@BlondieBoy

4/13/23, 7:42 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) I understand BlondieBoy's comment on fetishizing the interracial nature of the story. Still, other stories will focus on particularly looks that appeal to their authors. Tall well-built Irish men with dark hair and blue eyes are a common one. Another is long blond blue-eyed surfer boys. For others it's dark Middle Eastern or Hispanic men. I wonder if the real problem with fetishizing relationships between Caucasian white and African American black men is the extent to which racism has so long played an unfortunate negative role in American life. Certainly training their slaves to shift their dialect to that of historical African American slaves does perhaps push the fetish issue some. At the same time with all the current social issues over continuing personal and systemic racist biases, reparations and the karma seem timely. Another theme that is often so popular in fiction is the struggle and eventual success of the underdog. Personally I thought that part worked well. While i am fine to a large extent with non-consensual activities in erotic fiction, i do prefer stories in which everyone (other perhaps than clearly incorrigibly evil characters) has a happy ending. I love this whole series and it seems like everyone does indeed have a happy ending. I know I am certainly a happy reader!! So, thanks again for a very enjoyable story.

Martin
4/14/23, 6:12 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I agree with everything you said. However, I can't change the fact that darker-skinned guys turn me on. It's definitely not racist, it's just a preference. And only because certain people in past and present times base their prejudices on physical ethnic attributes, I won't start to feel bad about my personal preference. Just saying. Not everything needs to be racist, even if you stress certain stereotype attributes like his "huge black cock" etc.

4/14/23, 10:43 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) It's getting to the stage where it's impossible to post my stories on this site. I find it very depressing that readers cannot seem to separate current social politics from fiction, particularly porn fiction. Speaking as a black writer, I find 'white guilt' almost impossible to understand or sympathise with. To me, the current trend of movies and tv programmes nearly always having black people as the 'goodies' against 'evil' white 'baddies' is deeply patronising. I have included a lot of characters in my stories of different ethnicities and they are not all stereotypes by any means. Occasionally, they might be, but surely that is the prerogative of the writer? As I said, I now feel so constantly fearful that readers will 'take offence' that I am becoming reluctant to publish anything at all.

4/14/23, 10:59 AM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) It may come to pass that the only force which can move us on from the current cultural moment is... exhaustion.

4/14/23, 11:29 AM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) It would be a great loss to us if you stopped publishing here.

Martin
4/14/23, 12:09 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Agreed.
4/14/23, 10:48 AM
Great story!
Anonymous
4/14/23, 7:09 AM
hot!!! when Justin was wearing the superboy costume and Connor was naked being called a bad boy, it would have been hot if Justin pulled Connor over his knee and started spanked him and teasing his pussy.
4/13/23, 5:57 PM
Just read the most recent comment and realized I never submitted a rating. Shame on me. Fixed! Now, the important bits: I too vote for choice 3 but maybe with complications. Like maybe Gerald turns out to be away for a period of time so Noah can’t get in touch right away. Meanwhile Danny is desperate to be fed. I don’t like choice 2, but maybe Noah has to take him to a club or gloryhole so he can get his “fix” until Gerald returns. As far as the dilemma of what Danny shot all over the floor ( and Noah), maybe Noah can collect enough of the residue to convince Danny and get his original personality back. Name? There are several I could suggest. Did Danny have a middle name? Personally, I like Ethan.

Martin
4/14/23, 6:14 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you for this input! It's nice to know that people care about this series. I've written myself into a dead end, as I realize that people are not so fond of slutty Danny. Myself included, tbh :) Let's see if I can get out of this again. Thank you for your suggestion!