Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/13/23, 9:58 PM
Great story. I wish it had additional chapters. Perhaps brief highlights of Benji's new life and brief descriptions of the the other boy's matings.
4/13/23, 7:09 PM
OMG, Mr Green! Thank you so much for such a hot story. My own kinks include hypnosis, a slow seductive power exchange, and M/s. You hit them all so hard, this has become one of my very favorite stories. On top of that i tend to be naturally very attracted to Black Men, and often feel very submissive towards them. I am not so much into humiliation, but in this story it seemed relatively minor and appropriate. One aspect of power exchange stories i do not particularly like is an extreme life transformation which leaves the boy/sub/slave on the street without the intelligence or skills to survive. I am hoping that Master Brown will keep Luke so happily around for the long term, or at least sell him to another kind and appreciative Master. Thanks again for a great story. I will definitely be checking out more of your work, but right now i have a strong need to see how Master Brown does with his project. ~david
4/13/23, 3:51 AM
I created a photomanipluation sequence depicting the transformation in this story at DeviantArt: https://www.deviantart.com/criskane/art/Brady-To-Brody-Muscle-Growth-Transformation-957847933

4/13/23, 6:27 AM
Love it @[Cris Kane](/user/show/38728)!

4/13/23, 6:32 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Glad to hear it!
4/13/23, 6:21 PM
I love the way you write. I’ve been following you from your tumblr days. Think I got a few requests from you as well. I really loved this story. It had such a tender touch. I love how this is a transformative love story.
4/13/23, 4:21 PM
Thank you all for your comments ! Some of you did give me some ideas ;) The second chapter is in the works, I wish I would write it faster but I sometimes lack inspiration and life keeps me very busy... I hope you'll like it too !
Jan 31, 2018
4/13/23, 4:01 PM
This has me squirming in my chastity cage. Well done.
Test
4/13/23, 12:23 PM
Amazing writing. It's electric ⚡⚡

CasualWanderer82
4/13/23, 3:54 PM
@[Test](/user/show/10000638) Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
4/13/23, 2:33 PM
That was hot! And a great idea! I was pleasantly surprised by the inclusion of chastity. I was hoping to see the tickling explored more, but perhaps it would come in future parts, if you're willing to continue this story.
4/13/23, 12:48 PM
What a FUN WONDERFUL STORY!
Gingcub
4/13/23, 10:21 AM
Fucking hot! Can’t wait for more