Oh, Jack, you know how to keep me coming back to you.

extraordinary, super hot, the offer to be the whore of Justin's entire team... but the wait is desperate my friend... :star_struck:

This is just excellent. Hits all my notes. Thank you! Can't wait for more.

"PT With the Coach" is awesome! When I read this passage my cock got hard like a battering ram and I had to stop reading and shoot a load: He was owned by the Team. He did belong to the Team. He obeyed Coach. He served the Team. He served Coach. It's so hot that you get what real masculinity is all about: being a totally committed member of a team of jocks or cops or soldiers or other masculine professions. What I call "Team Masculinity". My own personal beliefs pretty much echo everything you wrote in your story. Here are some passages from a little document I keep modeled after the "Meditations" of Marcus Aurelius that I call my "Meditations on Masculinity": All masculine men want to be owned. All masculine men need to be owned. All masculine men crave to be owned. Even if they don't realize any of this. In fact, most men don't realize any of this. All masculine men want to obey. All masculine men want to serve. All masculine men want to be of use. All masculine men want to be used. All masculine men need to be used. Even if they don't realize any of this. To satisfy all these needs all masculine men need a team. All masculine men want a team they can belong to. All masculine men want a team they can be owned by. All masculine men want a team they can be loyal to. All masculine men want a team they can serve. A masculine man's team is his one true family. A masculine man's team identity is his one true identity. A masculine man's team life is his one true life. A masculine man's true purpose in life is to be part of the team and be owned by the team and serve the team and live for the team. A masculine man has no individual identity. His one and only true identity is his team identity. A masculine man's one and only and true purpose in life is to embody Team Masculinity, which is the one and only and true Masculinity. True masculinity is Team Masculinity. Team Masculinity is the masculinity of the US Marine Corps, of college wrestling teams, of State Troopers, of firefighters, of football or baseball or hockey or soccer or rugby players. A masculine man has no function outside his team, no purpose outside his team, no life outside his team, no meaning outside his team, no existence outside his team. His Universe is his team. Hopefully the above gives you an idea why your story was such a turn-on for me. I hope you'll be publishing a lot more stories with similar themes and similar passages.

The first part is hot and sad for me. I am curious of the “taken care of” Jeffrey is talking about.

Great story. I hope there will be more chapters coming.

Is anyone else wondering whether Neil just got force-fed an overdose of the juice, or if just maybe the trainer's room had an intensive "training" video and soundtrack? 🤔😵‍💫 Wonderful story! I've finished the series, just wanted to put this comment with this chapter. If there was just a bit of self-awareness of what was happening on their part, I'd have given it five Mind Control stars. I'd love to see some internal wrestling between their growing muscle lust & gainz and the cost (I'd pay the cost happily, myself)... But even without that, it's a HOT story!

Great story. I wish it had additional chapters. Perhaps brief highlights of Benji's new life and brief descriptions of the the other boy's matings.

OMG, Mr Green! Thank you so much for such a hot story. My own kinks include hypnosis, a slow seductive power exchange, and M/s. You hit them all so hard, this has become one of my very favorite stories. On top of that i tend to be naturally very attracted to Black Men, and often feel very submissive towards them. I am not so much into humiliation, but in this story it seemed relatively minor and appropriate. One aspect of power exchange stories i do not particularly like is an extreme life transformation which leaves the boy/sub/slave on the street without the intelligence or skills to survive. I am hoping that Master Brown will keep Luke so happily around for the long term, or at least sell him to another kind and appreciative Master. Thanks again for a great story. I will definitely be checking out more of your work, but right now i have a strong need to see how Master Brown does with his project. ~david

I created a photomanipluation sequence depicting the transformation in this story at DeviantArt: https://www.deviantart.com/criskane/art/Brady-To-Brody-Muscle-Growth-Transformation-957847933