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Feb 24, 2023
4/14/23, 12:20 PM
I like Chad! WELL played my jock friend!
Jan 13, 2018
7/5/21, 8:51 AM
I love the devolvement of Luke throughout the series. But I wish the story wasn't so focused on the interracial aspect. an interracial relationship doesn't need to always be focused on the fact of it being interracial. seemed like Black people were often being stereotyped or fetishized throughout the story.
7/6/21, 10:07 AM
True, but it's an erotic story, so it goes with the territory@BlondieBoy
4/13/23, 7:42 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) I understand BlondieBoy's comment on fetishizing the interracial nature of the story. Still, other stories will focus on particularly looks that appeal to their authors. Tall well-built Irish men with dark hair and blue eyes are a common one. Another is long blond blue-eyed surfer boys. For others it's dark Middle Eastern or Hispanic men. I wonder if the real problem with fetishizing relationships between Caucasian white and African American black men is the extent to which racism has so long played an unfortunate negative role in American life. Certainly training their slaves to shift their dialect to that of historical African American slaves does perhaps push the fetish issue some. At the same time with all the current social issues over continuing personal and systemic racist biases, reparations and the karma seem timely. Another theme that is often so popular in fiction is the struggle and eventual success of the underdog. Personally I thought that part worked well. While i am fine to a large extent with non-consensual activities in erotic fiction, i do prefer stories in which everyone (other perhaps than clearly incorrigibly evil characters) has a happy ending. I love this whole series and it seems like everyone does indeed have a happy ending. I know I am certainly a happy reader!! So, thanks again for a very enjoyable story.
Martin
4/14/23, 6:12 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I agree with everything you said. However, I can't change the fact that darker-skinned guys turn me on. It's definitely not racist, it's just a preference. And only because certain people in past and present times base their prejudices on physical ethnic attributes, I won't start to feel bad about my personal preference. Just saying. Not everything needs to be racist, even if you stress certain stereotype attributes like his "huge black cock" etc.
4/14/23, 10:43 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) It's getting to the stage where it's impossible to post my stories on this site. I find it very depressing that readers cannot seem to separate current social politics from fiction, particularly porn fiction. Speaking as a black writer, I find 'white guilt' almost impossible to understand or sympathise with. To me, the current trend of movies and tv programmes nearly always having black people as the 'goodies' against 'evil' white 'baddies' is deeply patronising. I have included a lot of characters in my stories of different ethnicities and they are not all stereotypes by any means. Occasionally, they might be, but surely that is the prerogative of the writer? As I said, I now feel so constantly fearful that readers will 'take offence' that I am becoming reluctant to publish anything at all.
4/14/23, 10:59 AM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) It may come to pass that the only force which can move us on from the current cultural moment is... exhaustion.
4/14/23, 11:29 AM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) It would be a great loss to us if you stopped publishing here.
Martin
4/14/23, 12:09 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Agreed.
Apr 12, 2023
4/14/23, 10:48 AM
Great story!
Apr 14, 2023
Anonymous
4/14/23, 7:09 AM
hot!!! when Justin was wearing the superboy costume and Connor was naked being called a bad boy, it would have been hot if Justin pulled Connor over his knee and started spanked him and teasing his pussy.
Dec 17, 2022
4/13/23, 5:57 PM
Just read the most recent comment and realized I never submitted a rating. Shame on me. Fixed! Now, the important bits: I too vote for choice 3 but maybe with complications. Like maybe Gerald turns out to be away for a period of time so Noah can’t get in touch right away. Meanwhile Danny is desperate to be fed. I don’t like choice 2, but maybe Noah has to take him to a club or gloryhole so he can get his “fix” until Gerald returns. As far as the dilemma of what Danny shot all over the floor ( and Noah), maybe Noah can collect enough of the residue to convince Danny and get his original personality back. Name? There are several I could suggest. Did Danny have a middle name? Personally, I like Ethan.
Martin
4/14/23, 6:14 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you for this input! It's nice to know that people care about this series. I've written myself into a dead end, as I realize that people are not so fond of slutty Danny. Myself included, tbh :) Let's see if I can get out of this again. Thank you for your suggestion!
Mar 7, 2023
4/13/23, 5:29 AM
For what it's worth, I enjoyed the story, I like the prospect of phase 2 being receptive to the urges of the consumer and not just being meathead juice. I'm interested in the plot lines for both schoolkid and Mr Matt, they have different needs from phase 2. Please share their journeys with us ☺️
4/14/23, 1:51 AM
@[Moo68au](/user/show/919772) Thank you for your support of the idea of this story. I'm very happy to hear you're a kindred spirit when it comes to this story. I've gotten some of the next leg written, but I've got a couple of things I have to get done so I'm taking a break from writing for a couple of weeks to get those done. But I definitely will work on the next parts with your support in mind.
Apr 14, 2023
4/14/23, 1:39 AM
Oh, Jack, you know how to keep me coming back to you.
4/14/23, 1:49 AM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) :sunglasses:
Apr 14, 2023
4/14/23, 1:37 AM
extraordinary, super hot, the offer to be the whore of Justin's entire team... but the wait is desperate my friend... :star_struck:
Apr 14, 2023
4/14/23, 1:08 AM
This is just excellent. Hits all my notes. Thank you! Can't wait for more.
Mar 11, 2023
Goose Garvey
4/13/23, 3:36 PM
"PT With the Coach" is awesome! When I read this passage my cock got hard like a battering ram and I had to stop reading and shoot a load: He was owned by the Team. He did belong to the Team. He obeyed Coach. He served the Team. He served Coach. It's so hot that you get what real masculinity is all about: being a totally committed member of a team of jocks or cops or soldiers or other masculine professions. What I call "Team Masculinity". My own personal beliefs pretty much echo everything you wrote in your story. Here are some passages from a little document I keep modeled after the "Meditations" of Marcus Aurelius that I call my "Meditations on Masculinity": All masculine men want to be owned. All masculine men need to be owned. All masculine men crave to be owned. Even if they don't realize any of this. In fact, most men don't realize any of this. All masculine men want to obey. All masculine men want to serve. All masculine men want to be of use. All masculine men want to be used. All masculine men need to be used. Even if they don't realize any of this. To satisfy all these needs all masculine men need a team. All masculine men want a team they can belong to. All masculine men want a team they can be owned by. All masculine men want a team they can be loyal to. All masculine men want a team they can serve. A masculine man's team is his one true family. A masculine man's team identity is his one true identity. A masculine man's team life is his one true life. A masculine man's true purpose in life is to be part of the team and be owned by the team and serve the team and live for the team. A masculine man has no individual identity. His one and only true identity is his team identity. A masculine man's one and only and true purpose in life is to embody Team Masculinity, which is the one and only and true Masculinity. True masculinity is Team Masculinity. Team Masculinity is the masculinity of the US Marine Corps, of college wrestling teams, of State Troopers, of firefighters, of football or baseball or hockey or soccer or rugby players. A masculine man has no function outside his team, no purpose outside his team, no life outside his team, no meaning outside his team, no existence outside his team. His Universe is his team. Hopefully the above gives you an idea why your story was such a turn-on for me. I hope you'll be publishing a lot more stories with similar themes and similar passages.
4/14/23, 12:56 AM
@Goose Garvey I'm glad you enjoyed the story and yes I will write other stories with this theme, most have it in some way or another.