Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/22/19, 1:34 AM
One really picky point I guess. The fees for the service are way too low and not really consistent with what the models have to do or what the clients get. Other than that,

4/10/23, 6:40 AM
@Anonymous Thanks for this great point. I read this when you first posted, but the reworked story now has more realistic pricing :)
8/22/19, 2:56 PM
Well-crafted, although it could've served to have developed abit more gradually...

4/10/23, 6:27 AM
@[Hypnominion](/user/show/453215) Thanks for your feedback man. I've just re-worked the whole story, so I hope you enjoy once it's been approved
Mar 31, 2023
4/10/23, 6:04 AM
Very odd for my tastes but so sweet. An interesting setup, and one that i enjoyed!
4/10/23, 6:03 AM
Another re-working of one of my favorite stories. I like this extended version which spends more time with Dave getting used to his new body and trying it out. The enhanced odors are the "hook". For me, the clumsy syntax and writing only add to the primitive enjoyment of this narration.
4/10/23, 5:03 AM
Great chapter. Thanks for everything that you are sharing with us.
8/16/22, 2:48 AM
My fingers are crossed that there's a chapter 3 and more in the works! Thanks for sharing your time and talent!

8/16/22, 6:19 AM
Thank you so much, @tpk2567๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป Yes, there will be a chapter 3 (currently working on it), and I can confirm there will be a chapter 4 . I donโ€™t have a lot of time to write these days so itโ€™s taking me much longer than normal to put out new work. Thank you for your patience ๐Ÿ˜˜.

8/16/22, 3:48 PM
@stimle your work is most definitely worth the wait!! Have a great day! Thanks again!

4/10/23, 4:59 AM
@[tpk2567](/user/show/10020310) Thank you!! I SO appreciate your kind words and your support.
4/10/23, 3:58 AM
Better than they deserved, and all the hotter for it.
4/10/23, 3:41 AM
Love the idea, just wish it was longer and more detailed!
4/10/23, 3:38 AM
This story get me off so hard, please write more :)
Anonymous
4/10/23, 2:50 AM
Spelling and grammar. Poor edit. The story could have gone longer. Plot development. Keep trying. It's not as easy as it seems.

Anonymous
4/10/23, 2:53 AM
@Anonymous I don't think critiquing his mistakes is something that's fun. That's just rude. The plot is good. They probably had writers block and tried their best