Recent Comments

4/10/23, 6:30 AM
A delightful and sexy play on one of my favorite scenes, even if i never really cared for the actual vore part, i loved how well this was written!

4/10/23, 11:39 AM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) Thank you so much, Mind-mind!
4/4/23, 1:01 AM
I loved that you decided to have a burly naga! It was quite a cheeky one this time, a bit more playful, a fun read. Great job, Twan!

4/10/23, 11:39 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thank you so much, Essex, I'm so glad you liked it!
Anonymous
4/10/23, 11:06 AM
Omg this is absolutely amazing
4/9/23, 4:46 PM
Really? Are you seriously gonna just leave it like this?

4/9/23, 7:49 PM
@[TcomJ](/user/show/921298) Yes! Now hush before I hook you up to a helmet and milker! (oh look I left the room for a few days...) :smiling_imp: Seriously, I have a massive case of writers block. Bear with us, please. You're not the only one who is clamoring for the ending.

4/10/23, 9:16 AM
@[MeddlerIncs](/user/show/913480) Oh damn, I know how that feel. The only thing you can do is to forget about writing anything at all if possible and go do other things unrelated for a very long time. This includes staying out of this website. It happens to me with other art form as well.😅 Take it easy.
Oct 2, 2006
4/10/23, 8:52 AM
A true classic. I remember seeing a short comic version of this on some site a long time ago.
4/10/23, 7:51 AM
Very hot!! As per usual :P

4/10/23, 8:26 AM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) Thank you very much! The second chapter is waiting to be approved as I type this, so hopefully it will be out soon!
Anonymous
8/22/19, 1:34 AM
One really picky point I guess. The fees for the service are way too low and not really consistent with what the models have to do or what the clients get. Other than that,

4/10/23, 6:40 AM
@Anonymous Thanks for this great point. I read this when you first posted, but the reworked story now has more realistic pricing :)
8/22/19, 2:56 PM
Well-crafted, although it could've served to have developed abit more gradually...

4/10/23, 6:27 AM
@[Hypnominion](/user/show/453215) Thanks for your feedback man. I've just re-worked the whole story, so I hope you enjoy once it's been approved
Mar 31, 2023
4/10/23, 6:04 AM
Very odd for my tastes but so sweet. An interesting setup, and one that i enjoyed!
4/10/23, 6:03 AM
Another re-working of one of my favorite stories. I like this extended version which spends more time with Dave getting used to his new body and trying it out. The enhanced odors are the "hook". For me, the clumsy syntax and writing only add to the primitive enjoyment of this narration.