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4/10/23, 3:41 AM
Love the idea, just wish it was longer and more detailed!
4/10/23, 3:38 AM
This story get me off so hard, please write more :)
Anonymous
4/10/23, 2:50 AM
Spelling and grammar. Poor edit. The story could have gone longer. Plot development. Keep trying. It's not as easy as it seems.

Anonymous
4/10/23, 2:53 AM
@Anonymous I don't think critiquing his mistakes is something that's fun. That's just rude. The plot is good. They probably had writers block and tried their best
4/10/23, 2:00 AM
Well, that was a hell of a roller coaster ride! Hot and fun in equal measure.
4/9/23, 10:23 PM
the writing creates a visual experience. You can almost smell the sex. THANK YOU
4/9/23, 9:38 PM
JUST WONDERFUL!
autoDream
4/9/23, 8:12 PM
I don't think we would ever see a harem. HypnoDavid likes to get many unique lays, but he does return to his favorites. I think he would be sure to make someone he really likes, such as Jese, finds a good excuse to return for a longer, more permanent stay. In terms of approaching a Harem? Maybe 2 or 3 bottoms at once. Otherwise, he prefers the one on one action. But yes, he does have a decent list of guys he can easily text for another video. With how powerful he is, it would be very hard after a night with him not to pick up the phone and say "yes" again. And again. And again...
autoDream
4/9/23, 8:09 PM
I don't know if the story idea is super creative or anything, but in terms of giving into my gay slut desires, it hits me hard. Simple, but I love the idea. Having a pornstar that you really really like? Then thinking to message them, and actually getting to the point of being in bed with them? Silly, but lovely. In terms of a continuation, I do think this is one of the stories I'd love to follow up with. When I was in the moment I definitely had a follow up chapter I would have enjoyed making. Might have to get back to it. I often revisit this fantasy during my "personal" time.
4/9/23, 5:00 PM
I *need* chapter 5, bad. Thank you all!
Martin
4/8/23, 7:12 PM
This is very well written, a promising start into what might become a really interesting series. I'm looking forward to read where this is going!

4/9/23, 4:30 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks so much! Means a lot coming from the site admin haha. Glad you enjoyed it :)