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Anonymous
4/10/23, 2:50 AM
Spelling and grammar. Poor edit. The story could have gone longer. Plot development. Keep trying. It's not as easy as it seems.

Anonymous
4/10/23, 2:53 AM
@Anonymous I don't think critiquing his mistakes is something that's fun. That's just rude. The plot is good. They probably had writers block and tried their best
4/10/23, 2:00 AM
Well, that was a hell of a roller coaster ride! Hot and fun in equal measure.
4/9/23, 10:23 PM
the writing creates a visual experience. You can almost smell the sex. THANK YOU
4/9/23, 9:38 PM
JUST WONDERFUL!
autoDream
4/9/23, 8:12 PM
I don't think we would ever see a harem. HypnoDavid likes to get many unique lays, but he does return to his favorites. I think he would be sure to make someone he really likes, such as Jese, finds a good excuse to return for a longer, more permanent stay. In terms of approaching a Harem? Maybe 2 or 3 bottoms at once. Otherwise, he prefers the one on one action. But yes, he does have a decent list of guys he can easily text for another video. With how powerful he is, it would be very hard after a night with him not to pick up the phone and say "yes" again. And again. And again...
autoDream
4/9/23, 8:09 PM
I don't know if the story idea is super creative or anything, but in terms of giving into my gay slut desires, it hits me hard. Simple, but I love the idea. Having a pornstar that you really really like? Then thinking to message them, and actually getting to the point of being in bed with them? Silly, but lovely. In terms of a continuation, I do think this is one of the stories I'd love to follow up with. When I was in the moment I definitely had a follow up chapter I would have enjoyed making. Might have to get back to it. I often revisit this fantasy during my "personal" time.
4/9/23, 5:00 PM
I *need* chapter 5, bad. Thank you all!
Martin
4/8/23, 7:12 PM
This is very well written, a promising start into what might become a really interesting series. I'm looking forward to read where this is going!

4/9/23, 4:30 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks so much! Means a lot coming from the site admin haha. Glad you enjoyed it :)
4/9/23, 3:27 PM
Ohhhhh this is nice. Not to fast. Taking your time. Looking forward to the next parts!
4/9/23, 3:05 PM
Thanks for sharing! This story is right up my alley. I love genies and I love it when people take over the world. I would love to see him as master of the world, surrounded by slaves. Would he have some favorites? Would he have changed how governments worked or religion? Would everyone be his ideal and that would get boring? Would the genie be able to keep granting his wishes? Is there only one genie in the world? Would another genie be able to resist? Or would one of the master’s new slaves make a wish intended to be good for the master but possibly be terrible for him? Oh, or what if one of the slaves found the master’s lamp and became the genie’s new master? What would he wish for?