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4/7/23, 10:16 AM
A new chapter to the grandfather's gift! Woo-hoo! :relaxed: That's a fun use of the pendant!
4/7/23, 9:35 AM
It's really too bad this was abandoned, because it was truly excellent. Good writing, slow burn, hot characters... ;-)
4/7/23, 9:27 AM
Except for something being wrong with the formatting, turning this into one very long paragraph, this was super hot! If someone can edit this, it deserves a fix.
Apr 4, 2023
4/6/23, 11:31 PM
Brilliant! Very original concept and incredibly well done. I keep following your stories, among the best on the site these days. You never cease to surprise and arouse, while at the same time, providing a great read. Keep it up, man, you got a fan here and I'm sure there's tons of us!

4/7/23, 7:49 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thank you! That means a lot. I hope you enjoy the next story I'm working on too. Got the ideas sorted, just got to hammer it out.
4/7/23, 6:18 AM
I can already see that this kind of story will hook me. It's quite my style. I already liked the characters, especially the hypnotist, who is not a complete psychopath. And if the name of the story wasn't "Meeting Max", I would want Eric and other athletes hypnotized too. Fuck it, I have a jock sweet tooth, XD!
4/7/23, 5:14 AM
Love this story so much, the gradual and increasing control 🤤 I only hope there is more attention paid to Matt adjusting to his cage, surely he must be getting uncomfortably horny? 😁
4/7/23, 4:44 AM
Woof. The way the narrator devolves when he starts getting tranced was... wicked hot. Would love to see a sequel where he can give a (mostly) coherent retelling of the nasty things they get up to. Thanks for posting!
4/7/23, 4:29 AM
Very excited for where this is going. One of the best examples of POV writing I've seen in a while, too. The characters' internal monologues feel recognizably different and help establish who they are. I'm definitely getting horny for Max right along with Jacob, nice teasing ;)
4/7/23, 4:11 AM
I've read this several times now, cannot wait for the next one!
4/5/23, 8:05 PM
I've been loving every chapter in this series! You've done such a wonderful job of creating investment and sympathy for the characters alongside a really compelling story! It's great how the chapters can be read as one-offs or as part of the larger whole.

4/7/23, 3:31 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thank you! I've really enjoyed writing this one and giving more depth to the characters than I have in some of my prior stories. It started as just an idea for a series of one-offs with the book as a framing device, but as the series went on I formed the underlying narrative that built to the end. I really liked the characters for Trey and Zack, I will likely use them as characters in future stories as well.