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4/7/23, 4:11 AM
I've read this several times now, cannot wait for the next one!
4/5/23, 8:05 PM
I've been loving every chapter in this series! You've done such a wonderful job of creating investment and sympathy for the characters alongside a really compelling story! It's great how the chapters can be read as one-offs or as part of the larger whole.

4/7/23, 3:31 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thank you! I've really enjoyed writing this one and giving more depth to the characters than I have in some of my prior stories. It started as just an idea for a series of one-offs with the book as a framing device, but as the series went on I formed the underlying narrative that built to the end. I really liked the characters for Trey and Zack, I will likely use them as characters in future stories as well.
4/7/23, 2:54 AM
This checks a lot of boxes. Slow burn. Characters I can get invested in. Great hypnosis. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
4/7/23, 1:42 AM
I hope this isn’t over it’s great! Love the way you have written a brat getting put in his place.
4/7/23, 12:29 AM
Hey everyone! Thanks so much for your lovely comments on this piece. Currently taking a break from this story, but will no doubt be back to flesh out the rest of the story. Writing-wise, I've gotten a commission to find out what happened to another one of my stories. I'll be posting here in a couple of weeks for free, but if you want to see what happened to Nestor and Jordan a bit sooner, you can get early access on my [Ko-Fi page](https://ko-fi.com/post/My-Stepdads-New-Master--Chapter-2-Early-Access-H2H0K5WSG) :)
4/7/23, 12:27 AM
To anyone's who's curious to what happened to Nestor and Jordan, someone has commissioned a story continuation that I'll be posting here in a couple of weeks for free! If you can't wait and are dying to find out what happens, you can get early access on my [Ko-Fi page](https://ko-fi.com/post/My-Stepdads-New-Master--Chapter-2-Early-Access-H2H0K5WSG) :)
4/6/23, 8:31 AM
Okay, Brad is down, lets see the others downfall and what happens in the aftermath

4/6/23, 12:40 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Soon.

4/6/23, 1:09 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Lets see how they will yurn pit

4/6/23, 7:22 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) What’s yurn pit?

4/7/23, 12:10 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) I mean Turn out, I mistyped, sorry
4/6/23, 11:16 PM
Ooh yeah, this is hot and sexy. I don't know where things will go in the future - some of the tags might lead to directions I don't often go in fiction - but the writing and the characters and the set up here is supremely hot and sexy and fun to read and very enjoyable. Also I like the two pov's in one story - fun stuff seeing both perspectives, especially as the hypnosis is from the dom's. I hope that Max becomes a good boy subby bottom for dom top Jacob, hehe. Big sub, small top is hot! I also like how Jacob is helping Max with his classes and I hope that continues - like thanks to his new sir Max does really well in sports and academics and stuff. Maybe Max can also have some of his frat buddies and team bros get some hypnosis too. hehe Yeah fun and sexy chapter!
4/6/23, 10:04 PM
Thank you so much for the story!! I'm loving it so far and already looking forward for more - it's odd but there's not a lot of stories that feature like proper, believable hypnosis. It's always so exciting when one does appear! Liked your style of writing too!
Anonymous
11/10/17, 8:51 PM
You write such awesome stories! Keep this one going. Definitely can’t wait to see what else happens to grant

4/6/23, 8:45 PM
@Anonymous I so agree. So erotic n so sexy hot