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4/7/23, 2:54 AM
This checks a lot of boxes. Slow burn. Characters I can get invested in. Great hypnosis. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
4/7/23, 1:42 AM
I hope this isn’t over it’s great! Love the way you have written a brat getting put in his place.
4/7/23, 12:29 AM
Hey everyone! Thanks so much for your lovely comments on this piece. Currently taking a break from this story, but will no doubt be back to flesh out the rest of the story. Writing-wise, I've gotten a commission to find out what happened to another one of my stories. I'll be posting here in a couple of weeks for free, but if you want to see what happened to Nestor and Jordan a bit sooner, you can get early access on my [Ko-Fi page](https://ko-fi.com/post/My-Stepdads-New-Master--Chapter-2-Early-Access-H2H0K5WSG) :)
4/7/23, 12:27 AM
To anyone's who's curious to what happened to Nestor and Jordan, someone has commissioned a story continuation that I'll be posting here in a couple of weeks for free! If you can't wait and are dying to find out what happens, you can get early access on my [Ko-Fi page](https://ko-fi.com/post/My-Stepdads-New-Master--Chapter-2-Early-Access-H2H0K5WSG) :)
4/6/23, 8:31 AM
Okay, Brad is down, lets see the others downfall and what happens in the aftermath

4/6/23, 12:40 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Soon.

4/6/23, 1:09 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Lets see how they will yurn pit

4/6/23, 7:22 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) What’s yurn pit?

4/7/23, 12:10 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) I mean Turn out, I mistyped, sorry
4/6/23, 11:16 PM
Ooh yeah, this is hot and sexy. I don't know where things will go in the future - some of the tags might lead to directions I don't often go in fiction - but the writing and the characters and the set up here is supremely hot and sexy and fun to read and very enjoyable. Also I like the two pov's in one story - fun stuff seeing both perspectives, especially as the hypnosis is from the dom's. I hope that Max becomes a good boy subby bottom for dom top Jacob, hehe. Big sub, small top is hot! I also like how Jacob is helping Max with his classes and I hope that continues - like thanks to his new sir Max does really well in sports and academics and stuff. Maybe Max can also have some of his frat buddies and team bros get some hypnosis too. hehe Yeah fun and sexy chapter!
4/6/23, 10:04 PM
Thank you so much for the story!! I'm loving it so far and already looking forward for more - it's odd but there's not a lot of stories that feature like proper, believable hypnosis. It's always so exciting when one does appear! Liked your style of writing too!
Anonymous
11/10/17, 8:51 PM
You write such awesome stories! Keep this one going. Definitely can’t wait to see what else happens to grant

4/6/23, 8:45 PM
@Anonymous I so agree. So erotic n so sexy hot
4/6/23, 7:58 PM
hope Max becomes a real regular
4/6/23, 5:37 PM
I like the slow start pacing of the story. Make the character's personality gradually changes was quite the delight. I wonder if you are going for the mindless route or the semi-aware conscious trance. I personally think that it was great if the target perceived what seemed to be abnormal or strange behavior, to be a normal, everyday routine. Retain their personality, but change their perceptions to whatever the hypnotist felt like doing.