Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/10/17, 8:51 PM
You write such awesome stories! Keep this one going. Definitely can’t wait to see what else happens to grant

4/6/23, 8:45 PM
@Anonymous I so agree. So erotic n so sexy hot
4/6/23, 7:58 PM
hope Max becomes a real regular
4/6/23, 5:37 PM
I like the slow start pacing of the story. Make the character's personality gradually changes was quite the delight. I wonder if you are going for the mindless route or the semi-aware conscious trance. I personally think that it was great if the target perceived what seemed to be abnormal or strange behavior, to be a normal, everyday routine. Retain their personality, but change their perceptions to whatever the hypnotist felt like doing.
4/6/23, 3:19 PM
Enjoyed this one hope there will be more chapters in the future.

Kip
4/6/23, 4:52 PM
@[JustMeCMH66](/user/show/10002441) I agree! Did Max drive back to the frat house, in only his compression shorts?
4/6/23, 4:48 PM
Love this story so much. Jock transformations are a favorite, especially young college beefy wrestling jocks
4/6/23, 4:47 PM
Love this story. Come back to it every so often as it's the classic wrestling jock age reduction transformation. Plus blue and gold are my favorite singlet colors!
4/6/23, 4:36 PM
Goddamn, just discovering this now and so hoping it gets a conclusion. Such fun fantasy worldbuilding used in such a hot, twisted, sexy way. Dialogue is engaging and sexy, the conflict is exciting, and I really want to know how this pans out. Thanks for sharing, and if you have another chapter on the back burner I'd be thrilled to see it released!
4/5/23, 6:41 PM
@Vano Stories, I read this on nifty as you were releasing it there and I _loved_ it. It's one of my favorite works—not just erotica, but writing in general—that I've read in years. The world-building, [don't worry, no spoilers ahead], the character development, the philosophical dilemmas, the complexities of plot and time… the heart! the humanity! the sex! It's really, really incredible work. Thanks for bringing it here.

Vano Stories
4/6/23, 3:43 PM
@[n_scriptus](/user/show/1803818) oh man what an incredibly kind comment, thank you so much!
4/6/23, 7:39 AM
I keep coming back to read this story over and over again, I find it so hot to think about. I never knew I had a weight gain kink before, but the complete control over Spencer made me very jealous! Thank you so much for writing something that turns me on every time I come back to it!

Swizz
4/6/23, 3:40 PM
@[Cetus](/user/show/2628565) Glad you liked it! Thanks for the positive feedback. :)
4/6/23, 3:11 PM
We need more