Recent Comments

4/6/23, 11:16 PM
Ooh yeah, this is hot and sexy. I don't know where things will go in the future - some of the tags might lead to directions I don't often go in fiction - but the writing and the characters and the set up here is supremely hot and sexy and fun to read and very enjoyable. Also I like the two pov's in one story - fun stuff seeing both perspectives, especially as the hypnosis is from the dom's. I hope that Max becomes a good boy subby bottom for dom top Jacob, hehe. Big sub, small top is hot! I also like how Jacob is helping Max with his classes and I hope that continues - like thanks to his new sir Max does really well in sports and academics and stuff. Maybe Max can also have some of his frat buddies and team bros get some hypnosis too. hehe Yeah fun and sexy chapter!
4/6/23, 10:04 PM
Thank you so much for the story!! I'm loving it so far and already looking forward for more - it's odd but there's not a lot of stories that feature like proper, believable hypnosis. It's always so exciting when one does appear! Liked your style of writing too!
Anonymous
11/10/17, 8:51 PM
You write such awesome stories! Keep this one going. Definitely can’t wait to see what else happens to grant

4/6/23, 8:45 PM
@Anonymous I so agree. So erotic n so sexy hot
4/6/23, 7:58 PM
hope Max becomes a real regular
4/6/23, 5:37 PM
I like the slow start pacing of the story. Make the character's personality gradually changes was quite the delight. I wonder if you are going for the mindless route or the semi-aware conscious trance. I personally think that it was great if the target perceived what seemed to be abnormal or strange behavior, to be a normal, everyday routine. Retain their personality, but change their perceptions to whatever the hypnotist felt like doing.
4/6/23, 3:19 PM
Enjoyed this one hope there will be more chapters in the future.

Kip
4/6/23, 4:52 PM
@[JustMeCMH66](/user/show/10002441) I agree! Did Max drive back to the frat house, in only his compression shorts?
4/6/23, 4:48 PM
Love this story so much. Jock transformations are a favorite, especially young college beefy wrestling jocks
4/6/23, 4:47 PM
Love this story. Come back to it every so often as it's the classic wrestling jock age reduction transformation. Plus blue and gold are my favorite singlet colors!
4/6/23, 4:36 PM
Goddamn, just discovering this now and so hoping it gets a conclusion. Such fun fantasy worldbuilding used in such a hot, twisted, sexy way. Dialogue is engaging and sexy, the conflict is exciting, and I really want to know how this pans out. Thanks for sharing, and if you have another chapter on the back burner I'd be thrilled to see it released!
4/5/23, 6:41 PM
@Vano Stories, I read this on nifty as you were releasing it there and I _loved_ it. It's one of my favorite works—not just erotica, but writing in general—that I've read in years. The world-building, [don't worry, no spoilers ahead], the character development, the philosophical dilemmas, the complexities of plot and time… the heart! the humanity! the sex! It's really, really incredible work. Thanks for bringing it here.

Vano Stories
4/6/23, 3:43 PM
@[n_scriptus](/user/show/1803818) oh man what an incredibly kind comment, thank you so much!