Recent Comments

M_S
4/3/23, 7:50 PM
I'm aware you mean this story directly as presented, but I can't help but keep reading it with the context of 'what if they're not dumb, and just amusing themselves with it as a cover, while the MC's ....enthusiasm....is something they're controlling him into having.', y'know, the 'control the person who thinks they're in control' trope. Mainly because -wow- the level of dumb. But thanks for writing!

4/4/23, 1:29 AM
@[M_S](/user/show/2659890) Haha I had that thought too. Like what if they're both just RPing with the bottom. I mean what if it's all a set up? It's just good fun ridiculous hyper fucking.
Anonymous
3/7/23, 8:41 PM
Even after all these years I reread this series frequently. Really hope there'll be a continuation someday!

3/28/23, 6:44 PM
@Anonymous Not gonna lie, was just talking with Swizz about continuing this…I definitely need to.

Anonymous
3/30/23, 2:12 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) GRANTS FAM

3/30/23, 4:18 AM
@Anonymous Grant’s dad…Tim…Tim’s dad…Grants brothers. Paul needs his retirement plan to come to fruition. 😈

Anonymous
3/31/23, 12:50 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) OMG YES

pmk
3/31/23, 2:44 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Yes! It would be amazing to see the story completed and see what happens with Grant and Tim!

4/1/23, 6:25 PM
@[pmk](/user/show/976276) I’ve just got a lot of stories I’m partway through lol. Next chapter of Joey, some stuff with Swizz, a story Swizz is writing that I’m helping him with, some of Robin’s partly completed works, AND a likely 12-15 chapter epic I’m in the middle of chapter 6. I’ve got so much mind control porn in my brain!!

Anonymous
4/2/23, 5:34 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Joey is the fan fav

Vince
4/3/23, 11:02 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Do you have a plan to release the epic if parts are done or waiting to finish?

4/3/23, 11:24 PM
@Vince I’ve learned from my mistakes. I have unfinished stories that are years waiting for continuation. So I’m getting it all done first lol. It takes place over one week, but big changes each day. So some days are multiple chapters. Starts on a Monday…I’m on Wednesday now lol

Anonymous
4/4/23, 12:02 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Love that
4/4/23, 12:01 AM
This was really well done. You really captured the desperation and lack of control of Josh as the candy took effect. And even developing an addition to the candy. His lack of cumming is interesting while still orgasming and satisfying and ending the horny effect.
4/3/23, 10:58 PM
It's been so long since you've updated that it seems like you'll never be back, but this is absolutely one of my favorite stories on the site. If you see this, know that you're still making new fans and someone out there would love to read a new chapter!
4/3/23, 10:26 PM
Loved this! Hope a continuation is planned
4/3/23, 10:04 PM
The first two paragraphs were well crafted. Now I have a sense of the body and a hint of the depravity of the swap. Nice writing.
4/3/23, 9:21 PM
A great start.
2/11/23, 8:04 AM
Really interesting start. Love the use of a mythical world becoming one with ours.

4/3/23, 8:44 PM
Really great to hear you complementing a story I wrote. Great inspiration to me. @[Titan](/user/show/17556)
Sebastián Apollo
3/10/23, 6:21 PM
Very well done! Even when it comes to the practicalities of demonic summoning and their cycles, the work is just flush with details and a really fun back-and-forth between William and this team of amateurs. The slow reveal of Gideon's plan was well-done, humorous as well. Not to mention the sexy transformation scene at the end! This would be a great standalone, or a good platform to launch into future stories in this universe. Good work!

4/3/23, 8:14 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Apologies for the lateness of this reply; truthfully I was hiding behind the anonymity of the contest and did not want to inadvertantly disclose that this was my first submission entirely: I wanted to see how it would be received and let it stand and fall on its own merits without it being judged as a first attempt. I had been worried that I was putting in too much extraneous detail and the attempts at humorous aside were a detraction rather than an asset to the story. Previous failed attempts at writing have faltered when I relased I had written several pages of backstory without actually going anywhere. So thank you for the kind comments that show I'm not as bad at this as I think I am. As for setting other stories in the same setting, the somewhat obvious follow-up featuring a gym manager meeting the new owners is something I have thought about since your comment was posted; however, I have been reluctant due to it likely ending up as a rehash of the final part of this story, although some ideas have occurred whilst writing this reply.
Anonymous
4/3/23, 6:53 PM
Damn, ive been edging for three hours and it was so explosive. My god, thank you so much for this story dude.