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May 1, 2016
Jack
4/4/23, 2:26 AM
Just a shame we haven't seen a continuation of this story. It really is fantastic.

Nutiper
4/4/23, 3:56 AM
@[Jack](/user/show/915335) I agree! It's among my old favorites, and it has visibly inspired other stories on this site. I know it says at the top of story that it was commissioned and paid for — and I've wondered more than once if MCBrain would accept a commission that was just "write more chapters of this please!" haha. Plus the dynamic of Milo noticing the changes (and the open ending) always made me wonder what a continuation would be like.
dmc
4/4/23, 1:44 AM
Hot, awesome start
Anonymous
4/4/23, 1:35 AM
Who is Richard?
M_S
4/3/23, 7:50 PM
I'm aware you mean this story directly as presented, but I can't help but keep reading it with the context of 'what if they're not dumb, and just amusing themselves with it as a cover, while the MC's ....enthusiasm....is something they're controlling him into having.', y'know, the 'control the person who thinks they're in control' trope. Mainly because -wow- the level of dumb. But thanks for writing!

4/4/23, 1:29 AM
@[M_S](/user/show/2659890) Haha I had that thought too. Like what if they're both just RPing with the bottom. I mean what if it's all a set up? It's just good fun ridiculous hyper fucking.
Anonymous
3/7/23, 8:41 PM
Even after all these years I reread this series frequently. Really hope there'll be a continuation someday!

3/28/23, 6:44 PM
@Anonymous Not gonna lie, was just talking with Swizz about continuing this…I definitely need to.

Anonymous
3/30/23, 2:12 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) GRANTS FAM

3/30/23, 4:18 AM
@Anonymous Grant’s dad…Tim…Tim’s dad…Grants brothers. Paul needs his retirement plan to come to fruition. 😈

Anonymous
3/31/23, 12:50 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) OMG YES

pmk
3/31/23, 2:44 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Yes! It would be amazing to see the story completed and see what happens with Grant and Tim!

4/1/23, 6:25 PM
@[pmk](/user/show/976276) I’ve just got a lot of stories I’m partway through lol. Next chapter of Joey, some stuff with Swizz, a story Swizz is writing that I’m helping him with, some of Robin’s partly completed works, AND a likely 12-15 chapter epic I’m in the middle of chapter 6. I’ve got so much mind control porn in my brain!!

Anonymous
4/2/23, 5:34 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Joey is the fan fav

Vince
4/3/23, 11:02 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Do you have a plan to release the epic if parts are done or waiting to finish?

4/3/23, 11:24 PM
@Vince I’ve learned from my mistakes. I have unfinished stories that are years waiting for continuation. So I’m getting it all done first lol. It takes place over one week, but big changes each day. So some days are multiple chapters. Starts on a Monday…I’m on Wednesday now lol

Anonymous
4/4/23, 12:02 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Love that
4/4/23, 12:01 AM
This was really well done. You really captured the desperation and lack of control of Josh as the candy took effect. And even developing an addition to the candy. His lack of cumming is interesting while still orgasming and satisfying and ending the horny effect.
4/3/23, 10:58 PM
It's been so long since you've updated that it seems like you'll never be back, but this is absolutely one of my favorite stories on the site. If you see this, know that you're still making new fans and someone out there would love to read a new chapter!
4/3/23, 10:26 PM
Loved this! Hope a continuation is planned
4/3/23, 10:04 PM
The first two paragraphs were well crafted. Now I have a sense of the body and a hint of the depravity of the swap. Nice writing.
4/3/23, 9:21 PM
A great start.