Recent Comments

4/3/23, 10:26 PM
Loved this! Hope a continuation is planned
4/3/23, 10:04 PM
The first two paragraphs were well crafted. Now I have a sense of the body and a hint of the depravity of the swap. Nice writing.
4/3/23, 9:21 PM
A great start.
2/11/23, 8:04 AM
Really interesting start. Love the use of a mythical world becoming one with ours.

4/3/23, 8:44 PM
Really great to hear you complementing a story I wrote. Great inspiration to me. @[Titan](/user/show/17556)
Sebastián Apollo
3/10/23, 6:21 PM
Very well done! Even when it comes to the practicalities of demonic summoning and their cycles, the work is just flush with details and a really fun back-and-forth between William and this team of amateurs. The slow reveal of Gideon's plan was well-done, humorous as well. Not to mention the sexy transformation scene at the end! This would be a great standalone, or a good platform to launch into future stories in this universe. Good work!

4/3/23, 8:14 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Apologies for the lateness of this reply; truthfully I was hiding behind the anonymity of the contest and did not want to inadvertantly disclose that this was my first submission entirely: I wanted to see how it would be received and let it stand and fall on its own merits without it being judged as a first attempt. I had been worried that I was putting in too much extraneous detail and the attempts at humorous aside were a detraction rather than an asset to the story. Previous failed attempts at writing have faltered when I relased I had written several pages of backstory without actually going anywhere. So thank you for the kind comments that show I'm not as bad at this as I think I am. As for setting other stories in the same setting, the somewhat obvious follow-up featuring a gym manager meeting the new owners is something I have thought about since your comment was posted; however, I have been reluctant due to it likely ending up as a rehash of the final part of this story, although some ideas have occurred whilst writing this reply.
Anonymous
4/3/23, 6:53 PM
Damn, ive been edging for three hours and it was so explosive. My god, thank you so much for this story dude.
4/1/23, 7:18 PM
I can’t tell if it’s the writing style, or just me, but I couldn’t really understand what is happening. It mentions a gorilla? But then the person is acting like a baby? So the formulas turned one into a full dog and the other into a hairy baby??

4/2/23, 12:34 PM
@[Leoscurse](/user/show/1219438) Not just you. I couldn't work out was happening quite frequently.

4/3/23, 5:32 PM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) @[Leoscurse](/user/show/1219438) Sorry it wasn't very clear. :disappointed_relieved: Henry is the only one who grows hair, at first ape-like, but he slowly becomes quadrupal like a dog. Jacob becomes a giant with the mind of a child. Sorry it was confusing.:sweat:
4/3/23, 3:59 PM
HOT story, and very well written. I love your ideas and your writing style! You definitely have the 'accidental' sex scenes nailed, haha. I'd love to see Theo become even more of a twink, leaning toward a femboy style. I can imagine the three of them going to the mall for sports gear and wandering by a sexy panty display in Victoria's Secret so Theo comes home with his first (of many) panties. Or maybe when Theo's birthday comes around, Jon and Teddy each give him some jewelry that will require him to get his ears and navel pierced, maybe his tongue, too. I'm sure whatever you write will be awesome. Can't wait to read more!!
4/3/23, 3:34 PM
Second reading of this awesome chapter, great imagination & writing. Look forward to the next.
4/3/23, 3:09 PM
The end is cute and twisted at the same time which is kinda my thing