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4/3/23, 9:44 AM
Love this
Sam
4/3/23, 9:12 AM
Okay I’m obsessed with this already!! I loved the intense fingering in this hope we see more extremes of that ;)
4/3/23, 9:04 AM
I love the inability to resist a larger cock. Especially making sense when he's already pretty big himself so anyone bigger must be better, right? Loved how out of control he got in this chapter. Gotta wonder if there's more at play here than just the cock size though. Pheromones? Demonic lusts. The assassin did call him a demon, maybe he wasn't being figurative. Other guy's named Mutt. Sounds like our pop star is starting a kennel.
4/3/23, 7:18 AM
Top tier content! Thank you for posting this - kinda curious what it’d be like if the dumb jocks meets other dumb jocks that they don’t mesh well with. Like rivalry and stuff haha
Rubber-king
4/3/23, 7:13 AM
Would love to see this expanded on. A handsome orc worker just doing his job and making the world gayer and gayer.
Anonymous
4/3/23, 7:12 AM
I'm just grateful for more preppy and formal stories here ^^
3/30/23, 8:07 PM
This is the last chapter of Course Correction for now as life's been a bit hectic. Don't fret, I'll have something available in a couple of weeks. I haven't decided what exactly to focus on yet so I'm happy to hear suggestions! As always, if you want more stories, you'll find some [on my Ko-Fi](https://ko-fi.com/beautemps) if you're so inclined :)

4/3/23, 7:03 AM
@[GoodTime](/user/show/1562150) Amazing chapter, feels like a bonus to the story, as previous chapter feels more like an end. About what to focus on, I’d love to see more of Performance Management, it really was another amazing read and so many promising ideas, but whatever you choose to do surely will be great, you are an amazing writer.
Anonymous
4/3/23, 6:15 AM
Will we ever see more of Derek or Nick? Or Ethan, i think you said he wasn't a drone last chapter?
2/2/23, 11:40 AM
Another horny story. There are certainly still many people in the mall who would like to have a few more wishes fulfilled. :-)

4/3/23, 6:05 AM
Yo @[ostmann30](/user/show/10000715) - who would you like to see transformed next?
Apr 2, 2023
nobody
4/3/23, 2:58 AM
The premise and buildup are great and the "trigger" (aka going to the gym) is good. the only thing missing is some more detail on the actual transformation. He went from "just left the gym" to "woke up young and muscular" with notihng in between which just left me wanting for it to be there. Other than that it's really good

Dylan
4/3/23, 5:31 AM
@[nobody](/user/show/930612) Thank you for the comment! Evidently the actual process of the transformation is important to you, and i discribe several ways, like natural workout, forced workout, chemicals used, electro stimulation, or even science fiction stuff like Nanites in several other stories. "Hercules' Gym" was meant to be different, short, a fantasy, no big explanations, just a normal fellow, someones whim, and " Boom" . Its about to discribe that a normal guy can be in the middle of the hurricane, with no chance to decide it, because someone, somewere, simply left a window open in the middle of winter, which caused the air around his house to heat up a tad more than usual. Which triggered a slight breeze. And so on. Or, in my story, someone was bored by something, not only Willies wife Sandra, which was the reason for her to go, and the reason for him to have time to go to a gym. No, it was a bored, powerful Being, who decided to have more material to choose of, aka a "God" who made new good looking men to fuck with a blink of an eye, basically. And such a "God" is like a child, he wants, and he does. No process. Decision, and result. But, Nobody, thx anyway, since i have a little idea in my head thanks to your comment. Look for " The storyteller", a story that will be out sometime in the future, a brainchild i owe you! :upside_down_face: Dylan