Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/1/23, 4:51 PM
Yes please do write more. This story is amazing and so well done!
Anonymous
4/1/23, 4:42 PM
how about a reluctant blow job?
Anonymous
4/1/23, 4:40 PM
Wow mate, love it. The seduction is fuckin' spot on! HOpe theres more to cum!
4/1/23, 3:22 PM
This was SO good! Loved every minute of it & can't wait to see what happens to him next. Maybe a team shower exercise, maybe he uses his charms on the opposing team, but it backfires somehow. Maybe he crosses paths with some other mega-hung celestial creature, with erotic outcomes! πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹ Either way, I really enjoyed it and hope you can be convinced to write some more! X
Anon
4/1/23, 12:26 PM
It's a great story and series but it's a peep hole. That really pulled me outta things lol.

4/1/23, 1:23 PM
@Anon Sorry, not sure what you mean.

Hazard0707
4/1/23, 1:44 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) I heard a knocking at the door, and when I looked through the pee hole… There he was, so I hid. Peep hole unless you were intending the characters penis he was looking down. It really pulled me out of the story making me think I misread the paragraph or misunderstood something.

4/1/23, 2:51 PM
@[Hazard0707](/user/show/10029923) Oh, omg whoops
4/1/23, 1:41 PM
Hmm let's see where it gets me. I love the story for now and I still hope for the best. The idea is hot, but I would prefer for rich to get his body back.
3/31/23, 7:41 PM
Always happy to see another Twan story :grin:

4/1/23, 11:46 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Thank you so much, Norismo!
Mar 23, 2023
Rub.berized
4/1/23, 11:21 AM
It's actually a really nice story even though I stopped myself a few times because it was quite tough to read because of the way things were done to the guy. But especially the end was getting more sincere and we saw a development beyond only cruelty. Would have loved to read more of it, even though it's not at all sexual to me.
4/1/23, 11:16 AM
"other stories and channels"? What channels? Also, I was waiting and waiting!!!! I will wait more to see what shenanigans happen next... As well as to see if there can be any lessons the opposing team experiences after the game.... 17/5: I am still checking everyday... Goddamit I'm still waiting for more! 11/6 wah! 5/7 I'm still here 17/8 gotta stop looking
4/1/23, 8:27 AM
I'm very happy that you came back to this story. It is very exciting. Besides, I love happy endings. If you ever happen to write a spinoff where Red and Blue have fun in bondage and rubber, I would love to read it too.