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slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
4/1/23, 4:07 AM
Fuck! To Serve. To Pleasure. To Obey. What life could be better?!
Mu
4/1/23, 3:44 AM
I need a spin off of these characters. The daddy is so hot
4/1/23, 3:01 AM
What a great read thank you for sharing. The overall idea was a lot of fun, and very well written. I also like others thought the overall pacing was great. Thanks again for a story wonderfully told.
Nutiper
4/1/23, 1:51 AM
Whew. One of my favorite parts of this chapter is the way you've taken a recently-popularized trend on the site—aka, self-lubricating butts—and done a spin on it that feels distinctive and somehow *intimate*. Like, *romantic* butt-lube... The fact that Carter describes it to himself as 'the lube my body had made *for* my buddy Brook'... Or the way Carter shivers and reacts to the feeling of cold air hitting his lubed hole, and seems viscerally affected by the sensations... Or the way its pheromone-laden scent 'bursts into the air like a spray of cologne' and causes Brook to be even *more* turned on and growly as he's making out with Carter... Butt-lube as eros. I love it. Let me put *that* on my next Valentine card... As other commenters have said, I'm really excited to read the remaining chapters when the contest is over! This story is fantastic, and incredibly fun.
Anonymous
4/1/23, 12:51 AM
Hot. I wonder how many guys here would have the same reaction as Max?
4/1/23, 12:06 AM
I’m really hope we don’t have to wait long for the conclusion. I love the series so far.
Anonymous
3/31/23, 11:19 PM
No hate, but I think I'm going to give up on this series. I appreciate your work but it's hard to stick around with zero updates.
Mar 30, 2023
3/31/23, 11:17 PM
The ending felt a tad bit rushed (notably, the kiss triger seems to come out of nowhere), but I really like when stories actually do a jock hypnotized into sort of nerd rather than the reverse. :smile: Really cool stuff!
Anon
3/31/23, 8:26 PM
I'm starting to realize your stories never have happy endings Which is hot

3/31/23, 10:06 PM
@[Anon](/user/show/910942) Really? I'm sure I've had plenty of 'happy endings'! Well,... maybe not 'happy' from the position of a healthy mind, but my protagonists tend to be a little too far gone to see their endings as anything BUT happy. :wink:
3/31/23, 9:11 PM
Wow, this hits all the right buttons! I can't stop reading it, over and over. I think I'm becoming brainwashed... And I LOVE it!!