This was perfect, Ash. I don’t have enough words for it. This hit all of my buttons. Please never stop writing

Only cumming (multiple times) across this story now - such an incredible piece of writing. Fantastic stuff. Defo gonna be delving into the rest of your material now

I wanted to see the Senator at home with those twins- but hot stuff dude! I.J. S.

Loving the slow build of this as they swap personalities and try and settle in their new roles. Really interesting and I hope there will be more interaction with other people and each other to come. I'd love to know how they're reacting to each other after the changes....

Hottt.

This was an interesting story, but it did feel sorta rushed and I wish there were more of Axel treating Quinn like an action figure scenes. Other than that, I do think you did a good job!

This was fairy-tale sweet while still being as hot as fuck. Amazing.

You should defo write more :-)

Rules of the Game Players: Nick - Straight/Bi himbo puppy; under Hypnotism D, Curse 1, Curse 2a: oblivious to all rules and players except Darius Darius - Gay Handler; under Curse 2b, avoided Hypnotism S; in control of Nick via Curse 1; knows about Hypnotism, all Curses, and all Players except Deborah (?) Gwen - Computer programmer, responsible for Hypnotism; doesn't know about Deborah or Curses, thinks both Nick and Darius are hypnotized, doesn't know Darius knows; doesn't know Darius and Nick are actually dating Deborah - Goth, responsible for Curse 2; messed up Curse 2, having a breakdown that Darius doesn't seem to be effected by curse 2b; doesn't know about Gwen, Hypnotism, Curse 1 or that Darius and Nick are actually dating May - Unalligned friend to all Players; has experienced Curse 1; doesn't know about any of this Trish: Witchy Referee responsible for Curse 1; "fixed" Curse 2 will undo everything but Curse 1 in a year; knows all the Rules, doesn't care about the Players Rules: Curse 1 - Cast by Trish to get a good fucking; when Nick and a girl are mutually attracted to each other, they go into "The Zone" and start mindlessly fucking each other; despite what she says, has many consent concerns, such as almost causing a fuck session in the middle of the airport and causing this whole misunderstanding based mess in the first place; also gives a dude Nick trusts ultimate control/veto power over him Curse 2 - supposed to drain muscle from Darius (b) and give to Nick (a) when a orders b around; was accidentally draining muscle from all dudes (fixed); makes b give into a's commands Hypnotism - makes D into an Alpha Douche King who orders everyone around, and S into a subby bottom; D is currently effecting Nick, S is not effecting anyone (intended for Darius) Twue Wuv: Darius has feelings for Nick independent of all of the above, Nick was under Curse 1 when he asked Darius to date him I think that's everything? PS: I'm going to miss Nick's muscles ☹️

**I agree with the first comment - there should be H LL to pay for Mark! I'd love to see a story where Mark gets all arrogant and careless... and *ZING: Shrinky dinks!