This was fairy-tale sweet while still being as hot as fuck. Amazing.

You should defo write more :-)

Rules of the Game Players: Nick - Straight/Bi himbo puppy; under Hypnotism D, Curse 1, Curse 2a: oblivious to all rules and players except Darius Darius - Gay Handler; under Curse 2b, avoided Hypnotism S; in control of Nick via Curse 1; knows about Hypnotism, all Curses, and all Players except Deborah (?) Gwen - Computer programmer, responsible for Hypnotism; doesn't know about Deborah or Curses, thinks both Nick and Darius are hypnotized, doesn't know Darius knows; doesn't know Darius and Nick are actually dating Deborah - Goth, responsible for Curse 2; messed up Curse 2, having a breakdown that Darius doesn't seem to be effected by curse 2b; doesn't know about Gwen, Hypnotism, Curse 1 or that Darius and Nick are actually dating May - Unalligned friend to all Players; has experienced Curse 1; doesn't know about any of this Trish: Witchy Referee responsible for Curse 1; "fixed" Curse 2 will undo everything but Curse 1 in a year; knows all the Rules, doesn't care about the Players Rules: Curse 1 - Cast by Trish to get a good fucking; when Nick and a girl are mutually attracted to each other, they go into "The Zone" and start mindlessly fucking each other; despite what she says, has many consent concerns, such as almost causing a fuck session in the middle of the airport and causing this whole misunderstanding based mess in the first place; also gives a dude Nick trusts ultimate control/veto power over him Curse 2 - supposed to drain muscle from Darius (b) and give to Nick (a) when a orders b around; was accidentally draining muscle from all dudes (fixed); makes b give into a's commands Hypnotism - makes D into an Alpha Douche King who orders everyone around, and S into a subby bottom; D is currently effecting Nick, S is not effecting anyone (intended for Darius) Twue Wuv: Darius has feelings for Nick independent of all of the above, Nick was under Curse 1 when he asked Darius to date him I think that's everything? PS: I'm going to miss Nick's muscles ☹️

**I agree with the first comment - there should be H LL to pay for Mark! I'd love to see a story where Mark gets all arrogant and careless... and *ZING: Shrinky dinks!

The intertwining approach of past and current is so fucked up but it works. Like talking about your childhood while having sex kind of fucked up, but it does justify(?) coach's thought process. And that he thought Luke would be his son in law... awww. One thing though, I did not expect Coach to be such a level-headed and coherent person. He's also a lot younger than I expect, in the way he speak (read: the way this chapter is written), but it also feel distinct from Luke's (read: previous chapters), which is drown in clueless-ness and lust. Might just be stereotyping, but when I think of coaches (or any father figure) the first thing that comes to mind is "incapablility of articulating thoughts in the way they think should be expressed". Maybe bc he's a single father? Or maybe he's just not a stereotype. Kinda refreshing, but also make me feel guilty of thinking of him that way.

This was incredibly well written. I would very much like to read another chapter this. I also think you have set yourself up with some very unique and creative ways this could go. Since you mentioned that it's his bodily fluids that cause people to become interested, and there are more than bodily fluids then cum. ;-)

Promising start!

Always great to see a new chapter. Things are really heating up now. Nice reveal that the fight was never really between the families having sex or not but rather abuse and care. It is a bit sad that the uptight religious values that Peter has been struggling to uphold does not seem to have any actual relevans with the powers "upstairs". I do wonder how kinky this love based sex is allowed to be. Is it monogami? Will Peters new online friends get to see them have sex on the webcam? Spying on him in the shower was use and abuse but if they both agree to it, then a webcam show might still be in the cards and could teach the other men about the difference between lust and love. Perhaps the guys have already gotten a show if Peter has already managed to put a camera up in Blakes room. I can't wait to read the conclusion.

Love this entire concept, hypnosis and personality along with physical changes are my favorite. Would be fun if “Francis” got some actual cosmetic procedures of his own and switched jobs for a fresh start with a new face lol

Super cute! Cannot wait to see where and how this plays out.