Recent Comments

3/30/23, 12:57 PM
This was incredibly well written. I would very much like to read another chapter this. I also think you have set yourself up with some very unique and creative ways this could go. Since you mentioned that it's his bodily fluids that cause people to become interested, and there are more than bodily fluids then cum. ;-)
3/30/23, 12:21 PM
Promising start!
3/30/23, 12:02 PM
Always great to see a new chapter. Things are really heating up now. Nice reveal that the fight was never really between the families having sex or not but rather abuse and care. It is a bit sad that the uptight religious values that Peter has been struggling to uphold does not seem to have any actual relevans with the powers "upstairs". I do wonder how kinky this love based sex is allowed to be. Is it monogami? Will Peters new online friends get to see them have sex on the webcam? Spying on him in the shower was use and abuse but if they both agree to it, then a webcam show might still be in the cards and could teach the other men about the difference between lust and love. Perhaps the guys have already gotten a show if Peter has already managed to put a camera up in Blakes room. I can't wait to read the conclusion.
3/30/23, 7:33 AM
Love this entire concept, hypnosis and personality along with physical changes are my favorite. Would be fun if “Francis” got some actual cosmetic procedures of his own and switched jobs for a fresh start with a new face lol
3/30/23, 6:57 AM
Super cute! Cannot wait to see where and how this plays out.
3/29/23, 10:27 PM
Definitely keep this going! And Dom doesn’t need to just 180° into being into men right away too. I’m sure that will be a struggle for a while.

Ash
3/30/23, 6:21 AM
@[Chadwoodtales](/user/show/10022598) Oh I definitely plan to make Dom’s preferences change over time. And he’s gonna fight it the entire time.
3/30/23, 6:19 AM
I liked it! Would love to see where this story goes :)
3/29/23, 6:29 PM
This was very hot and VERY well written, one of the best new stories that I’ve read in a while. If you decide to continue this story in a part 2, or more, I do like the idea of Dom finding a way of putting the whole football team under his control (once he has time to process and get over the fact that he’s now into men). Also, would like to see how a romantic relationship between Brian, Tom, and Max would play out; especially with Max, I feel an emotional confession scene is due after that little truth bomb Bibi dropped.

Ash
3/30/23, 6:16 AM
@[hypcurious](/user/show/38862) Thank you so much for the compliment. Based on the feedback so far, I’m definitely gonna make a part 2. I’ll definitely see what I can do about your ideas. I also want to see how a relationship would work out, especially since the side on the receiving end doesn’t even want it (yet?).
3/29/23, 3:46 AM
id love to see more of Dom's misadventures! especially him navigating that his powers make dudes fall fully in love with him, and not just horny for him

Ash
3/30/23, 6:09 AM
@[gargayle](/user/show/10018766) I plan to make that a central theme, along with the crazy sex. There’s definitely gonna be some clashes and decisions to be made.
felix
3/28/23, 6:36 PM
This was a wild and hot rush. I couldn’t contain myself by the locker room scene. Demons, man. So hot.

Ash
3/30/23, 6:08 AM
@[felix](/user/show/2338654) Thanks. I never really had a thing for demons before writing this, but now… Maybe a few more stories about them in the future are in order, just to be sure. :thinking: