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3/28/23, 11:42 PM
That sucks I wanted to see what the orphanage looked like. It seems like it would have been a great chapter

3/29/23, 3:32 AM
@[Hagnasty](/user/show/649725) I understand, that just wasn't the direction this story was intended to go. The orphanage was intended more as a dark, uncertain fate for the protagonist to be rescued from, I'd not guessed that some would find it appealing and react to the possibility being snatched away.

3/30/23, 1:44 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I'd assumed Mike was destined to be his daddy, but I thought we would have got to see what an area full of new littles would look like. I just see it as an interesting opportunity. We get to see so many new stories personalities and different type of people.
Nutiper
3/29/23, 11:59 PM
Okay I know this is kinda a dumb thing to fixate on, but I love how you wrote Ig's jealousy of Brook at the start of the chapter. I feel like it's so easy to write jealousy in a way that feels ugly, or possessive. Instead, the way Ig gets jealous (and how he unknowingly reveals his actual tender feelings) makes him feel _more_ lovable. It makes us realize, too, that even with all the sexy smirking and babyboy-ing, he really _likes_ Carter. (And also it's just very very funny how terrible he is at hiding it. And how Mr. Ignacy himself fixates on Brook's _name_, of all things...) I feel like Ig and Carter had such fantastic sexual chemistry in the previous chapter that of course I couldn't help but want more of them. Like, wow! But I was still thinking of Brook and Carter as the "main couple" of the story... up until the opening of this chapter. You managed to get me rooting for a power _throuple_, all from the little jealousy scene alone.
3/29/23, 3:36 PM
Huh. I was expecting Silo to be assimilated to the football team or atleast to Brett and not the whole opposing team. If a whole team is assimilated, this means more complication and it might attract the government or the scientist from the other story (cant really remember who atm). Or at least more for Rahim to fuck and have sex with. 🤭

Kods
3/29/23, 11:55 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Huh, Sex? Fuck? Never heard of such terms. Rahim is a good pure boy. He's not thinking of tight jock asses, large jock cocks, bodacious pecs, rippling abs. No, no certainly not.:wink:
Mr. White
3/28/23, 11:43 PM
Oh man, Rahim’s ass is in danger XD An awesome update, can’t wait to see what a whole team of jocks does to Silo!

Kods
3/29/23, 11:46 PM
@[Mr. White](/user/show/911190) It's time Rahim considers running away. An ass and dick can only take so much abuse. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
3/29/23, 3:56 AM
Feel like Rahim's school is going to get a whole lot of transfers next semester. Gonna have to put Rahim's face on the brochure as a feature to draw new students in at this rate.

Kods
3/29/23, 11:44 PM
@[Silvoid](/user/show/1138564) Might as well rename the school
3/29/23, 6:43 AM
There are few things I want to say 1 I love your story, not many are on my list of favourites, and few of them are sadly discontinued. I am so happy that you continue with yours so I and many others can enjoy it. 2 About story, looke like Diego's team is going to loose if all of the enemy players get to know what is on Diego mind as they would know their tactic and have better understanding of each other while playing. Means better team play. 3 I think that Sid and Carson should pay for it. Not anything hurtful but to make them regret their actions. 4 I rly hope that Silo will be able to get back to his cute jelly form and he is ok. Thank you author for great chapter, and good luck in your new jobe. I hope you will continue to enjoy o, and will not get tired of it.

Kods
3/29/23, 11:44 PM
@[Iriefall](/user/show/10019488) Thank you! Thank you! I'm sure somethings going to happen with that opposing team. Sid and Carson certainly made things worse though looks like Rahim's going to have his hands full before he can get to them.
3/29/23, 11:03 PM
I love this story SOOOO much. I really want it to just continue forever. My heart skips whenever I see another chapter posted. I’m going to be so sad when this comes to a conclusion but dear lord I love it. Excellent work all around!
AgentCoyner
3/29/23, 10:47 PM
I would _absolutely_ love to see more of Dom!!
Anonymous
3/29/23, 8:24 PM
The image looks like he shit on himself..

3/29/23, 10:04 PM
@Anonymous Yeah, it’s my bad, I’m a total amateur at digital art, but I wanna try and improve, and that mainly starts with tons of practice. I have yet to reach any moderate level to draw people or liquids for that matter.
Anonymous
3/29/23, 9:30 PM
Are You going to upload the next part? :'(