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3/28/23, 8:56 PM
please please continue this!
3/28/23, 7:40 PM
Very interesting piece of work. I guess that if it were to continue we'd have to jump up in time and see Mowgli and the kids as young adults, but it would be interesting to see how the mind control changes and grows as the children age and become adults.
3/28/23, 7:20 PM
This was extremely well written and erotic AF! Please continue this series!
3/28/23, 7:12 PM
This was delightful - hypnosis and conditioning at a gym is a classic for a reason, and this handled it well. I really loved the scene where they were admiring Trent's muscles and he's just standing there stripping for them (and then forgetting afterwards). That was delightful. Definitely looking forward to reading more from you - either in this universe or in a new story!
3/28/23, 6:09 PM
Am I sick for thinking that the janitor thing actually happend and he's subconsciously suppressing it to the point he's reliving it as dreams? Esp. with the panic episode and all that. (I know that's not the case, per your reply, but that's what I thought after reading the woke up yelling from a nightmare situation) Idk, that'd be both hot, traumatic, and would drive the story to a completely different spiral where he eventually confront the janitor again, and depending on if he has emotional support (coach & sammy etc.), wreck him. (Headcanon) I'm sick.

3/28/23, 6:31 PM
@[CieL](/user/show/748750) That’s a hot scenario, but yeah, not what I’m going for. I think I kinda messed up writing the dream. It’s not supposed to be scary; it’s supposed to be erotic and hot, leaning into a bit of degradation kink, contrasting the slovenly janitor with the clean cut jock. I don’t think Luke is even afraid, since he could easily fight the janitor off. I’ll have to give it another pass through.
Jack
3/28/23, 6:14 PM
Yes! More more more more more!
3/28/23, 5:45 PM
Mooooore ❤️
Anonymous
3/28/23, 5:38 PM
You definitely need to continue this! This was so well written and so hot. The pacing was incredible, creating a nice slow burn without it feeling the least bit tedious. I can’t wait to see what you come up with next!
3/28/23, 5:32 PM
This was great! Extremely well written and so hot!
3/28/23, 4:01 PM
You did a fine job of detailing the transformations and working out the practical details involved. The brief cuckolding scene added to the overall impact.