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Nutiper
3/29/23, 2:05 AM
For a while I've been sitting here trying to think of a way to explain what I like *so much* about this story. How there's a glow of "damn, this is so fun to *read*" down to the littlest detail. Brook calling Mr. Altamura the "Italian Stallion" and liking to neigh when he sees him through the window. Norm's face flexing like there's a bunch of wires behind it. The whole exchange of "Oh your name's Carter? You *look* like a Carter, wink wink" "Oh yeah, well what the hell is your name, buff security guard dude?!" "....Ignacy." I think the closest metaphor I've landed on is: it's like the prose is carbonated. "Sparkling erotica". Yeah, I know... SodaStream, eat your heart out! But hey, it makes the fingering-and-rimming scene between Ig and Carter incredibly fun to read, too. Somehow it ended up hotter and more intense than most of the actual sex scenes I've read on this site. Carbonation, in *my* smut? It's more likely than you think!
3/29/23, 1:29 AM
Really hot so far, looking forward to the next part...
2/3/23, 8:08 AM
Loved this story. If there is a spinoff, I'm kind of wondering what would happen to Don after this...maybe he is put through the dominance modulator to make sure he doesn't tell anyone?

2/3/23, 7:41 PM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Definitely need to see this!

3/29/23, 1:08 AM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) That would be amazing
3/28/23, 10:19 PM
OH NO *Kool-Aid Man full of blue slime crashes through the wall* OH YEAH!

Kods
3/28/23, 11:28 PM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) Once again your jokes are on point! :rofl:
3/28/23, 10:58 PM
Oh yes! This was crazy hot. More Dom the incubus!
Robusto
3/28/23, 10:47 PM
Delighted to see Thomas and Dan back! The mohawk got me all worked up too!
3/28/23, 4:35 PM
...this doesn't make sense. I'm reading a story that includes some of the dirtiest, most explicit sexual content I've ever read...and I'm _tearing up_. :p But seriously, this is truly incredible! Thank GOD you kept the flashbacks to Luke's childhood; the contrast between Coach gently taking care of Luke in the past to absolutely blowing his back out in the present was a work of genius (T.S. Eliot called that a "zeugma"--the "yoking" of two contrasting ideas). But it's also super-important because it absolutely explains WHY Coach is doing what he's doing. In the previous incarnation (which ended before we reached this chapter), the Coach's desire for Luke was almost too sexually-driven. Here, we see that what he does is ultimately an act of love and compassion--and not in a creepy "let's justify this sexual assault" way that many writers fall into, but a sense of genuine care for the kid. Your indications of consent and Luke being of age are also crucial to making the story work. Thank you for a truly incredible story. :)

3/28/23, 10:41 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thanks for the thoughtful comment. Yeah, it was really important for me to portray Coach as helping Luke, giving Luke what he needs, and not from any selfish lustful desires that he has. Love and compassion is the way to put it. TBH stories where coaches/teachers have sex with students make me very uncomfortable. So I really tried to create the right cocktail of circumstances for why it would be OK. I know I know it's just a silly porn story, but there is a certain ick factor for me. Glad you enjoyed the flashbacks, I'm happy that I kept them in too.
3/28/23, 10:03 PM
I really hope you continue with this story.
Martin
3/28/23, 9:00 PM
I loved that! Nothing better than a loving BDSM story... You should have x-posted to cupid, so I could add some hearts to your rating, too :)

Throne
3/28/23, 9:51 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I'm so glad you liked it. When I started to write, I didn't know the story would end that way. Thanks for the suggestion.
3/28/23, 8:56 PM
please please continue this!