Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/29/23, 12:44 AM
I enjoyed the story.

3/29/23, 12:33 PM
@Anonymous Thanks!
Boomer
3/29/23, 9:30 AM
Write your own story. Don't use AI.

3/29/23, 12:32 PM
@[Boomer](/user/show/10007241) Sorry, I wrote the main idea of the story, but since English is not my strong point, I chose to let AI help me optimize the sentences and come up with some ideas (or I could be AI XD).
3/29/23, 10:16 AM
the plot is thickening, let see how the others change
3/29/23, 9:06 AM
Perfect! Max just melted my cold stony heart though :)
3/26/23, 11:12 PM
Excellent first story. I would never know. And I didn’t see any errors. Not to mention it was hot and I hope you plan to continue.

Tashegranate
3/29/23, 6:08 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't know if I'll continue this story but I'll defiantly write more once I get some ideas!
3/29/23, 3:44 AM
I've quickly fallen in love with your high-concept gay science fiction stories so this one is definitely a departure from those, but I have also found it very enjoyable.
Jan 14, 2023
ares
3/29/23, 3:38 AM
pt2 pls i fking loveit
3/29/23, 3:30 AM
I'm not wild about this entity as a new character, but I love this series and I'm so glad you've been adding to it! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter
Nutiper
3/29/23, 2:05 AM
For a while I've been sitting here trying to think of a way to explain what I like *so much* about this story. How there's a glow of "damn, this is so fun to *read*" down to the littlest detail. Brook calling Mr. Altamura the "Italian Stallion" and liking to neigh when he sees him through the window. Norm's face flexing like there's a bunch of wires behind it. The whole exchange of "Oh your name's Carter? You *look* like a Carter, wink wink" "Oh yeah, well what the hell is your name, buff security guard dude?!" "....Ignacy." I think the closest metaphor I've landed on is: it's like the prose is carbonated. "Sparkling erotica". Yeah, I know... SodaStream, eat your heart out! But hey, it makes the fingering-and-rimming scene between Ig and Carter incredibly fun to read, too. Somehow it ended up hotter and more intense than most of the actual sex scenes I've read on this site. Carbonation, in *my* smut? It's more likely than you think!
3/29/23, 1:29 AM
Really hot so far, looking forward to the next part...