Recent Comments

3/26/23, 9:37 AM
I am so sorry someone stole your hard work. You have real talent! This wasn't going to go down a road I would have appreciated, but the attention to detail on the psychological corruption was out of this world.

3/28/23, 12:01 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) let me assure you that the ending i ~~am~~ _was_ working towards ~~will blow~~ _would have blown_ your cock off. _alas, because some doucheknuckle cunts can't act like they live in civilized society, now nobody gets to play with it. i've taken my toys and gone home._
2/15/23, 4:37 PM
:hot_face: Interesting story I can't wait for chapter 3

2/16/23, 10:16 AM
@[LeftSteve](/user/show/10033877) If you want a sneak peek of the next chapters, feel free to contact me ! :wink:

3/28/23, 6:20 AM
@[John Kuir](/user/show/588303) Yes I To see a sneak peak
3/28/23, 6:17 AM
Getting good I hope it keeps growing!
Anonymous
3/28/23, 5:44 AM
i cant stop rereading this story!
3/27/23, 3:01 AM
it didn't take long for the transformations to begin.

3/27/23, 3:47 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I hope that's a good thing!

3/27/23, 3:10 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Definitely. Seems like they'll be a Twink no more, Nerd no more, and Jock no more? They could go a few different ways. My vote is for Zack to become a gay himbo.

3/27/23, 3:15 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I think you are catching on a little. My hope is that you are surprised a little too.

3/27/23, 3:32 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Oh yes. Your changes are always interesting and tend to go ways I don't expect but enjoy. The slow changes makes the story all the more savory.

3/27/23, 11:32 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you! I’m trying a slower pace this time for sure.

3/28/23, 1:06 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Oh, I meant that the transformations in your story were slow enough to enjoy already.
Anonymous
3/28/23, 12:20 AM
Honestly I really like the idea of him being half aware of what they we're doing. So many stories of himbofication but so few like this.
3/27/23, 11:45 PM
This was a complete delight to read, and I thank you for the whole damn thing. You should be proud!
Lampshade15
3/27/23, 11:02 PM
Really enjoying this story so far, looking forward to the next chapter!
3/25/23, 9:35 PM
I’ve never left a comment on erotica before, but I have to say that I adore this story! I was just looking for something to get off to—and don’t get me wrong, you absolutely succeeded on that front—but I ended up invested enough to keep reading even after I finished. The way you played with the medium of choose your own adventure stories was so clever. But that by itself wouldn’t be enough to carry a story. No, what I’m really impressed me was your ability to efficiently characterize every member of a pretty large cast. And the mythology nerd in me loved how you handled the Norse stuff. Big fan of Woddin and her wolves allowing themselves to change and grow over the centuries rather than remaining mostly static. So overall, just wanted to say great work. I’m excited to read your other stuff after the challenge is over.

3/27/23, 10:51 PM
@[Lambsbridge](/user/show/1176976) I'm really touched by this comment! Thank you for leaving it, I really appreciate it! I definitely was juggling a lot with this story, and hearing that all these different aspects (characters, mythology, form) were working successfully for a reader is incredibly gratifying to hear. 😊 Thank you again for leaving this comment. It made my day.
3/26/23, 11:32 AM
I’m binge reading this story and can’t stop! I’m cascading through the “wrong” branch, after following the Micah branch, and really can’t wait to read about Xavier succumbing to all those greedy tops! My slutty self, though, is awed by his willpower facing down all those cocks in this branch! I think I’m recognizing the author you chose to get inspired by in this Zeus branch. I’ll keep my deductions until, hopefully, we get answers. I have a guess about who you are too, but as you asked in other comments I won’t reveal my guess either (although if I’m correct I love the punny pseudonym). Definitely rating this very highly for the contest. Fingers crossed 🤞

3/27/23, 10:37 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) I'm so glad you've been enjoying the story, this is such a nice comment to receive! 😄 And I'm also very charmed that people keep making guesses on the authorship, haha. I think readers have guessed at least three different authors at this point... But yes, keep the guesses private for now! Gotta keep it anonymous till results are announced...