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3/27/23, 11:45 PM
This was a complete delight to read, and I thank you for the whole damn thing. You should be proud!
Lampshade15
3/27/23, 11:02 PM
Really enjoying this story so far, looking forward to the next chapter!
3/25/23, 9:35 PM
I’ve never left a comment on erotica before, but I have to say that I adore this story! I was just looking for something to get off to—and don’t get me wrong, you absolutely succeeded on that front—but I ended up invested enough to keep reading even after I finished. The way you played with the medium of choose your own adventure stories was so clever. But that by itself wouldn’t be enough to carry a story. No, what I’m really impressed me was your ability to efficiently characterize every member of a pretty large cast. And the mythology nerd in me loved how you handled the Norse stuff. Big fan of Woddin and her wolves allowing themselves to change and grow over the centuries rather than remaining mostly static. So overall, just wanted to say great work. I’m excited to read your other stuff after the challenge is over.

3/27/23, 10:51 PM
@[Lambsbridge](/user/show/1176976) I'm really touched by this comment! Thank you for leaving it, I really appreciate it! I definitely was juggling a lot with this story, and hearing that all these different aspects (characters, mythology, form) were working successfully for a reader is incredibly gratifying to hear. 😊 Thank you again for leaving this comment. It made my day.
3/26/23, 11:32 AM
I’m binge reading this story and can’t stop! I’m cascading through the “wrong” branch, after following the Micah branch, and really can’t wait to read about Xavier succumbing to all those greedy tops! My slutty self, though, is awed by his willpower facing down all those cocks in this branch! I think I’m recognizing the author you chose to get inspired by in this Zeus branch. I’ll keep my deductions until, hopefully, we get answers. I have a guess about who you are too, but as you asked in other comments I won’t reveal my guess either (although if I’m correct I love the punny pseudonym). Definitely rating this very highly for the contest. Fingers crossed 🤞

3/27/23, 10:37 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) I'm so glad you've been enjoying the story, this is such a nice comment to receive! 😄 And I'm also very charmed that people keep making guesses on the authorship, haha. I think readers have guessed at least three different authors at this point... But yes, keep the guesses private for now! Gotta keep it anonymous till results are announced...
3/27/23, 10:31 PM
Nice start. A minor point, try to use more active language and more varied sentence structures
3/27/23, 10:30 PM
Holy crap~ This story hits all the high kink points I didnt even know I was looking for! The effortless way that the cops in this series take on the humiliation and exposure as perfectly normal leaves me leaking each time I read it. Also, the entirety of him handing over things like the car, wedding ring and bank passcodes gets me everytime. This is amazing. Thanks for the different views into this police force being taken down!
3/26/23, 1:13 PM
Oh man! The sex banter in this chapter is soooooo hot 🥵 I think Bruno and Tony could make me cum just by talking to me like that!

3/27/23, 10:30 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) Oh, don't tell Bruno and Tony *that*, you'll just encourage them to try and make it happen... 😉
3/27/23, 10:15 PM
This was a fun story! I liked the playfulness of it and I enjoyed the concept. I love a good pun as a basis for a story, too. The hottest part for me was when our protagonist was being shown around the showroom. I think that structurally, that part is also especially strong!
Gingcub
3/27/23, 9:47 PM
Love this series man! Hope to read more about permanently locked Trent soon!
Jack
3/27/23, 8:04 PM
WOAH. This is so fucking hot.