Recent Comments

3/27/23, 5:10 AM
What a great start! I hope to see where it goes

3/27/23, 7:05 AM
@[LTTL](/user/show/911183) Ironically, I hope to see where it goes too!
3/27/23, 5:49 AM
Incredible! Love the personalized paradises for each guy, and the small changes. It’s also cool to see a mix of physical and mental transformations, and how some places are implied to be highly uniform (every guy in the arcade become a dumbed-down twunk) while others are more unique (the volleyball players each undergoing a different change). This is great stuff!

3/27/23, 7:04 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thank you so much! All the nerds had to be dumbed down to do other fun things ;).
Love it
3/27/23, 6:39 AM
Love it. When Will there be an update?
Clicked
3/27/23, 3:33 AM
Love the concept! I hope there are more stories either with Trent or in the universe in general. Its certainly got me pulsing in my cage!
3/27/23, 3:19 AM
Awesome writing and it was so hot.
3/22/23, 6:37 PM
Oh yes! Love to see this kind of story. I wonder if it’s going to start to spread? ;)

3/27/23, 3:19 AM
@[jockboy51](/user/show/936451) That would be great! My thoughts exactly!
Anonymous
3/26/23, 3:59 PM
Loved this!

3/27/23, 2:46 AM
@Anonymous Thanks anon!
nycboot
3/27/23, 12:10 AM
Long after this contest is forgotten, I think all of us readers are going to remember Carter and Brook. This is such a wonderful story, great characterizations - i'm sure the ratings will speak for themselves. Bravo!
rwriter51
3/23/23, 3:54 AM
Unbelievable! That was like a sucker punch when Sammy's name materialized on the page. Another excellent chapter. Thanks for all you do.

3/26/23, 10:08 PM
@[rwriter51](/user/show/10008532) He has that effect right?