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3/26/23, 4:13 AM
I hope that the hapless protagonist is used for the same types of fun that the person whose image he's been cast in (inkedbrln) gets up to. :hot_face: The first image (the one that he wanted to look like) bears a strong resemblance to Jack Stacked. I doubt that the company made a "clerical error" and with the protagonist being reconditioned to enjoy his new body, they won't have much argument at the end of the year when they offer to... not change him back as promised. Definitely a hot little caption story, and hell yes I would take the one year option. But then, I happen to think Inkedbrln is incredibly hot. :grin:

3/26/23, 7:53 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I think he’s incredibly hot as well… totally not the type I usually respond to, but there is something there that is an undeniable example of male perfection in another way…. He is absolutely the inspiration for this story! I hope I can live up to his example!
3/26/23, 7:47 AM
Super hot, but still horribly terrifying! Not sure what to think -- except i need to read on. i need to read the next chapter.
3/26/23, 7:24 AM
Wow another horny and hot chapter. I shot my load on the phase "your now one of us" . And you love having sex with men. Looking forward to Jack waking up the next morning.
3/26/23, 7:04 AM
Thanks for the correction. I believe a Mox Lotus was from the unhinged set. Which was a bunch of ridiculous cards. I just put it in there because I wanted someone to comment on it. Congrats you’re the first person to ever catch that! Anyway I do hope you liked the actual story.
3/26/23, 6:05 AM
I do wish this had a part 2
Jun 26, 2016
Anonymous
3/26/23, 3:35 AM
This story's idea is great, but falls structurally due to some errors in the writing, like mixing up the names when Matt first finds the mushrooms. And the vagueness during the entire story left me questioned. Though, the writing descriptions are great, there needs to be more in the progression aspect.
3/26/23, 12:05 AM
I also share a body mod kink, especially in the consensual non-consent field. I also really appreciate that this story would be possible in real life. Which is great for heightening realism. I sent you a private message, if you’d like to chat more.
Mar 25, 2023
3/25/23, 11:45 PM
Hot. Hope there is more.
3/25/23, 11:33 PM
Honestly; I would’ve though English was your first language, very well written. And I loved everything else about the story! Great character in Aaron, musk and a character falling unwittingly to their own machinations are amazing to me. I hope you write more :)
3/25/23, 11:30 PM
I dunno if you’ll ever see this comment, but I just wanna say your story is flawless for me. Character, world building, description, and the hot stuff XD. I’ve read this a few times, here and on Ao3, thought I’d finally comment on how amazing it is