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3/26/23, 6:05 AM
I do wish this had a part 2
Jun 26, 2016
Anonymous
3/26/23, 3:35 AM
This story's idea is great, but falls structurally due to some errors in the writing, like mixing up the names when Matt first finds the mushrooms. And the vagueness during the entire story left me questioned. Though, the writing descriptions are great, there needs to be more in the progression aspect.
3/26/23, 12:05 AM
I also share a body mod kink, especially in the consensual non-consent field. I also really appreciate that this story would be possible in real life. Which is great for heightening realism. I sent you a private message, if you’d like to chat more.
Mar 25, 2023
3/25/23, 11:45 PM
Hot. Hope there is more.
3/25/23, 11:33 PM
Honestly; I would’ve though English was your first language, very well written. And I loved everything else about the story! Great character in Aaron, musk and a character falling unwittingly to their own machinations are amazing to me. I hope you write more :)
3/25/23, 11:30 PM
I dunno if you’ll ever see this comment, but I just wanna say your story is flawless for me. Character, world building, description, and the hot stuff XD. I’ve read this a few times, here and on Ao3, thought I’d finally comment on how amazing it is
3/25/23, 8:08 PM
I wonder what will happen to jimmy

3/25/23, 9:50 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Jimmy will make his return!
3/25/23, 7:57 PM
I bet Jimmy sent in Mikey's info to remove his competition. Maybe Zack and Mikey will become a couple. Who knows?

3/25/23, 9:50 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Oh you caught me! That's exactly what happened. Jimmy wanted to remove his competition. As far as Zack and Mikey, that's one of many possibilities!
3/25/23, 8:55 PM
Quick correction: a mox lotus is not a legal card. It was a joke card made 5 years after the game started. Also also, any of the original mox would go for tens of thousands of dollars these days (although the price only spiked above 10k after 2020 for…reasons). Good story though! I just hope someone got fired for that blunder.
3/25/23, 12:25 PM
Hahaha. Magic shop? Muscle? A doctor of men’s health especially virility ? I enjoyed this story very much. I like how you made them better men who enjoyed their lives together. The one thing I didn’t like what’s up with the dr. Why did them taking the medicine make him deage? In any case, I would love to find a Dr. Jirou. I need the motivation.

Rodready
3/25/23, 8:52 PM
@[dumbmusclehypnojockboy](/user/show/911192) Thanks, I’m glad you liked the story. The idea was that Dr Jirou takes years from them, so they get a bit older, and he gets younger. The price he extracts for his magic.