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3/25/23, 4:49 PM
Love how they are all doing this to each other. Except Jimmy! Don’t leave him out!

3/25/23, 5:09 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I really wanted them to do it to each other. I just couldn't think of a reason that Bradley would have done it to Mikey. Jimmy may return!
3/25/23, 4:25 PM
FANTASTIC work!!!

benedick543
3/25/23, 4:34 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Thank you! That means a lot coming from you! Your works were the first ones I browsed through when I joined this site, and I gotta say, your writing is on another level!

3/25/23, 4:37 PM
@[benedick543](/user/show/10034418) You are far too kind! I can’t lie, it’s stories like yours that reinvigorate my writing bug that tends to dwindle from time to time. Incredibly excited to see what you write next 🥰
3/25/23, 3:41 PM
Oh!!! Great setup. I love the over the top 80s/90s stereotype D&D nerd. Love me a good trope :) Very excited to read more. And love the name of the company. ReMoved Blocks.

3/25/23, 3:50 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) I appreciate your comment about the company name a lot! I obviously love it too and felt clever.
3/25/23, 3:35 PM
A great set up! I look forward to more!

3/25/23, 3:49 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you!
3/25/23, 3:49 PM
Loving the story!! Can't wait to read more :) Just an idea - maybe Jack's IQ drops and he gradually becomes a dumb leather- and muscle-obsessed himbro. One more idea - Jack the leather boy meets a hot, cocky athletic kid his age at the gym and transforms him into his twinky pup, becoming thinner and more boyish, losing his cocky alpha attitude. Whatever you write, I'm sure it will be great! Thanks for sharing your awesome story!
3/25/23, 2:46 PM
earliest story on the website?
3/25/23, 1:23 PM
What an awesome story! Thank you. You are a very talented writer.

benedick543
3/25/23, 1:27 PM
@[Currious](/user/show/10009075) This means a lot! Thank you!

3/25/23, 2:25 PM
@[benedick543](/user/show/10034418) You are welcome. BTW, I saw you were concerned with the story maybe dragging but honestly the story moves so well that I didn't get so much as a hint of it dragging. Hope you have time to post the epilogue. Always been attracted to this genre, that is tech used to modify/enslave and this will be one of my favorites.
3/25/23, 1:45 PM
Hot. Can't wait for more
3/25/23, 12:51 PM
Oh man. Could you send me the address of this clock shop, please 🙏
3/25/23, 8:08 AM
Man. This storyline didn't even need the chip, the power dynamics between the two is so fucking hot it's its own mind control! Fantastic interplay.