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3/25/23, 3:35 PM
A great set up! I look forward to more!

3/25/23, 3:49 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you!
3/25/23, 3:49 PM
Loving the story!! Can't wait to read more :) Just an idea - maybe Jack's IQ drops and he gradually becomes a dumb leather- and muscle-obsessed himbro. One more idea - Jack the leather boy meets a hot, cocky athletic kid his age at the gym and transforms him into his twinky pup, becoming thinner and more boyish, losing his cocky alpha attitude. Whatever you write, I'm sure it will be great! Thanks for sharing your awesome story!
3/25/23, 2:46 PM
earliest story on the website?
3/25/23, 1:23 PM
What an awesome story! Thank you. You are a very talented writer.

benedick543
3/25/23, 1:27 PM
@[Currious](/user/show/10009075) This means a lot! Thank you!

3/25/23, 2:25 PM
@[benedick543](/user/show/10034418) You are welcome. BTW, I saw you were concerned with the story maybe dragging but honestly the story moves so well that I didn't get so much as a hint of it dragging. Hope you have time to post the epilogue. Always been attracted to this genre, that is tech used to modify/enslave and this will be one of my favorites.
3/25/23, 1:45 PM
Hot. Can't wait for more
3/25/23, 12:51 PM
Oh man. Could you send me the address of this clock shop, please 🙏
3/25/23, 8:08 AM
Man. This storyline didn't even need the chip, the power dynamics between the two is so fucking hot it's its own mind control! Fantastic interplay.
3/25/23, 7:38 AM
Definitely excited for the next chapter! I wanna be a locked jock for this gym
3/25/23, 5:53 AM
OH MY GOD, I MEED AN EXTRA CHAPTER OF WHERE ALL THE CHARACTERS ARE AFTER ONE YEAR! THIS WAS ONE OF THE MOST ENJOYABLE WORKS I’VE HAD GHE PLEASURE OF READING IN A WHILE! also, I like how mine control is used for some good here! I love that we’re putting into focus how it can help with anxieties, uncertainties and the like! And the working out and adhering to a healthier lifetsyle! Goddamn! Ughhh I wanna see Hank after a year has passed so bad!

benedick543
3/25/23, 6:00 AM
@[Down The Foxhole](/user/show/204705) Oh wow, thank you so much! I actually wrote an epilogue but wasn't sure if I should post it since the story might already be dragging! I'll now look into posting that soon (after some proofing and all haha)
3/25/23, 4:57 AM
Really excellent story with some top-notch mind control!