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3/25/23, 5:53 AM
OH MY GOD, I MEED AN EXTRA CHAPTER OF WHERE ALL THE CHARACTERS ARE AFTER ONE YEAR! THIS WAS ONE OF THE MOST ENJOYABLE WORKS I’VE HAD GHE PLEASURE OF READING IN A WHILE! also, I like how mine control is used for some good here! I love that we’re putting into focus how it can help with anxieties, uncertainties and the like! And the working out and adhering to a healthier lifetsyle! Goddamn! Ughhh I wanna see Hank after a year has passed so bad!

benedick543
3/25/23, 6:00 AM
@[Down The Foxhole](/user/show/204705) Oh wow, thank you so much! I actually wrote an epilogue but wasn't sure if I should post it since the story might already be dragging! I'll now look into posting that soon (after some proofing and all haha)
3/25/23, 4:57 AM
Really excellent story with some top-notch mind control!
3/24/23, 9:46 PM
Great story!! Though I was a little surprised he didn't give Fred a long term modification

3/24/23, 11:52 PM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) Same!

benedick543
3/25/23, 4:35 AM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) @[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) I was actually considering this, but I thought that because Mark and Fred were there for a business transaction, there was still a level of professional courtesy between them. If you notice throughout the series, despite all the sex happening, there's mutual respect between those two characters. After all, they could be working with each other if Fred's company closes the deal with Mark's company. Also, I'd like to think that Mark actually took a liking to Fred, and they'll become friends eventually, so he didn't really want to meddle too much with his mind.

3/25/23, 4:55 AM
@[benedick543](/user/show/10034418) That makes sense. It would've been a little awkward even if it had been a positive modification
3/25/23, 3:53 AM
This has been an excellent story, one of the best and the best for years. Great name and great premise. And now it’s really getting interesting.
Anonymous
3/25/23, 2:04 AM
great story glad you are back to finish it, and looking forward to the rest
3/25/23, 1:19 AM
Good beginning! Hot set-up and I continue to enjoy your penchant for lycra-clad studs with all manner of invasive things going into their holes.
3/25/23, 12:25 AM
Hot!
3/23/23, 10:38 PM
Before I finish the last chapter I have to say this has been great. The only thing that could possibly improve it would be "bad ends" along the way where our protagonist actually does get fucked and his quest ends and he becomes an incubus or the consort of an elder god or come inflated and actually impregnated by Zeus. But let's see how this goes.

3/24/23, 11:33 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) I'm so glad you've been enjoying it so far! Unfortunately I didn't put any "bad ends" into the story, mostly because of how none of the paths actually contradict each other — it's less of a splitting of realities and more a splitting of perspective, and then they all recombine at the end. But I agree that it'd be fun to read what those "bad ends" would look like... 😉
3/24/23, 11:02 PM
Really loving your stories and this one did not disappoint. Can’t wait for part 2.
3/24/23, 10:17 PM
Another great chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, and I hope that Luke and Sammy can resolve this so they can be happy together. They obviously care a lot about each other, and I was sad to see them fight