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3/23/23, 10:52 PM
I'm at this point not sure if it's a good idea to try to understand everything, as thinking of this as a mental break really explains so very, very much. Or as an extended hallucination from the OD. ANYWAY, my point is, if I try to think too hard about it my brain feels yucky. I don't love all the kinks you have in this story, but I've barrelled past them because this is by far the most inventive and wildly strange erotica I have ever read. And at this point, I've read a _lot_. You are very, very good at what you do. And someday, I may be able to categorize what that is. Or, you know, just give up on that, because the ride has very much been worth it
3/23/23, 8:38 PM
Fuck the way you write how the mind control affects Terry and rob is so hot. They're so totally mind fucked that their morals are switched almost completely. Jerked off so much to this story. Looking forward for more :) Thank you !

3/23/23, 10:47 PM
@[NZcontroller](/user/show/23780) Glad you enjoyed it so much! Next chapter is underway, just hammering out the details,...
Satyr Hedonist
3/23/23, 10:02 PM
Enjoyable buildup! Definitely following this one. Do we learn what is a _phylopheliac_ in the story? I don’t know that word and the internet didn’t help me.
3/23/23, 10:01 PM
I get that you did this for the toxic masculinity competition and I think you filled the brief and then some, _buuuuuut_... God _damn_ was there a good story there without it. You're very good at descriptiveness, because I could see the dungeon, see the monitors, see the prisoners, and feel what they were feeling. It was all incredibly hot at very well written. (Gotta say, I hated the Jamie thing though)
Mr. Vertigo
3/23/23, 8:20 PM
I've been reading your stories for years now and I just have to say you've come a long way when it comes to the quality of your work. Every part of the story is fun to read, the non-sex points actually carry weight and aren't just there to connect the fucking parts. The characters have emotion and arcs and it's all just top notch work. Great stuff dude!

3/23/23, 9:42 PM
@Mr. Vertigo Thank you, thank you! That means so much to me. I think I have improved as well, and my style has changed. I try to focus a lot more on characters now. I'm glad you are along for the ride. Actually, when I previewed this chapter I got a lot of feedback that the flashbacks were disruptive or unnecessary, but I'm glad I stuck to my guns and kept them in :)
3/23/23, 8:16 PM
omg yes great build up from the previous chapter to this one focusing on the daddy coach with a caring protective streak <3 Daddy coach just wants the best for poor luke :)))

3/23/23, 9:41 PM
@[AdibHass](/user/show/910212) Daddy coach will help Luke however he can... even if that means he has to reluctantly slam that fat bubble butt with his big dick all night long ;)
Sebastián Apollo
3/23/23, 6:39 PM
Another great chapter in this series! Although, I'll admit, I'm actually beginning to feel a bit bad for Luke now. Good to know he has such good friends to help him scratch that itch! Hope things get resolved between Luke and Sammy soon, Luke's aloofness about the whole situation was rather cute! Good work, keep it up!

3/23/23, 9:41 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) I'm glad you feel sympathy for Luke! That means you care about the character and I conveyed him well. And next chapter will be all about Sammy!!
Apr 11, 2021
3/23/23, 9:33 PM
so hot omg! i especially love the scene where Diego becomes uncomfortable and achieves some metacognition by telling Chuck that it is humans who need to accommodate the Masters
3/23/23, 8:11 PM
Just found this and I love it!
3/22/23, 5:05 PM
Wow. Truly great. I second everything already said. I was also reading this “left to right” across the branches as each level was added. And I enjoyed the humor sprinkled in — like sharing Netflix passwords! That still has me laughing. Brilliant!

3/23/23, 7:23 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I'm so glad the humor worked, haha, I had a lot of fun with it! And I love hearing how different people engaged with the story—it's very exciting to me. 😁 Thank you for your really nice comments!