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3/24/23, 7:51 PM
Wish we had tags for nipcocks and nipcum
3/24/23, 7:13 PM
Wow! Thanks so much for this great story! For me the seduction and the process of creating the hypnotic trance and achieving full control is the hottest part of hypnosis erotica. You did a wonderful job with the slow build. All of the preliminary videos Jese had watched established where certain responses came from even though not an explicit part of their direct interaction, e.g. Jese's use of 'Master'. Too often for me the seduction and induction as represented are much too short. In my admittedly limited experience hypnotic influence and control typically takes time and a lot of repetition. Your inductions were still quite short (but well done!), but again the multitude of times Jese had watched the process on HypnoDavid video resolved the issue of repetition and the pre-existing depth of influence. When Jese started using the term 'Master', I had hopes that they might end up having a long term M/s relationship, and even wondered if David had already enslaved a few of his other video submissives and maintained his own harem. I am still wondering if that is where the story could go from here. After all David would likely want Jese to go back to his usual circumstances in order to be sure that Jese would end up choosing a continuing M/s relationship without further influence. Thanks again!!
3/24/23, 7:01 PM
So filthily hot
Anonymous
3/24/23, 5:47 PM
Obsessed sexually with the ass.
3/5/23, 10:27 PM
Fallen into the trap. Eden is the best place to be. Thanks, Jack. It has been a while and I have been watching and waiting.

3/24/23, 5:24 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Yeah with my Pateron I have enough income coming in to write my own stuff and not back to back commissions.
3/5/23, 9:53 PM
Eden Academy? Is this going to be related to the Top Dawg series?

3/24/23, 5:23 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Yep, it is.
3/24/23, 12:00 PM
Not sure if I'm doing something wrong, but the picture links don't seem to work for me for whatever reason. Even still, this kind of gradual shift stuff is definitely my cup of tea, especially when it's so well written, and flows smoother than Red's pre 😜 Excellent work here, I feel I'll well enjoy part two once I get to reading it 😈💖

Martin
3/24/23, 4:48 PM
@[Lavince](/user/show/303502) They don't work for me either. Why don't you just upload them to this site, Soren?

3/24/23, 4:57 PM
@[Lavince](/user/show/303502) Glad you enjoyed so much! I remember having a lot of fun writing this one, and Red was hot as hell. Hope you like the next!

3/24/23, 4:59 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Oh, the pics from Lindholm just don't exist anymore; I went back to find them in our DMs and they were gone! I'll just remove them from the description.
Mar 23, 2023
3/24/23, 4:57 PM
Great story, very detailed description of the psychology of the robot that the main character becomes, I hope to see the follow-up story, and it takes so much time for the main character to succumb to the master
Mar 23, 2023
Chastor
3/24/23, 4:27 PM
Nice story, but just want to point out that "circle of maybe 15 degrees radius" means absolutely nothing
Elm
3/24/23, 4:26 PM
Still one of my favorite stories on this site, so good! The way they mindfuck each other, and the way you describe how their mind and bodies change its nothing short of amazing!