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1/22/26, 3:45 AM
Bravo - I loved this!
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1/22/26, 2:10 AM
Hoping the next chapter comes soon!
1/22/26, 12:41 AM
Please continue this story. It's exceptionally well written.
1/22/26, 12:09 AM
I’m a Maccies crew member and I find this so hot 🔥
1/21/26, 10:59 PM
Fuck yeah, that's so hot
1/21/26, 10:26 PM
I come back to this story often! It has the correct amount of “wrong” in it; the way I visualize the characters adds bucket loads of “right!”
1/21/26, 9:27 PM
*doffs hat, bows* Well done.
1/21/26, 6:12 PM
Another great chapter, I wonder how much of their personality they will retain. Now I hope there's another chapter to find out why the dad couldn't be transformed.
1/20/26, 2:30 AM
Really hot all throughout. Loved the constant struggle for dominance, both internal and external. And a very sweet ending. Sorry to not leave a longer comment but I’m typing one handed here lol

1/21/26, 5:42 PM
@[ganymedesJockstrap](/user/show/10002453) Typing one-handed is a compliment in and of itself! Good to hear the whole thing is hot, there's not penetrative sex in every chapter so I was a little worried, but I was pretty sure the mindfuckery and intense homoeroticism would make up for it. Glad you enjoyed.
1/18/26, 1:54 AM
You know what? Chase is happy, Caspian is happy, Hunter is happy, hell I'm sure even Hawk is happy, so I'm happy! Exceptional story, Soren, especially since I know you've spent a long time working on it, so I'm really glad to see it finally come to fruition. I especially love the way that the act of bottoming and being a frat bottom was portrayed in this story - whereas Hawk and his allies saw it as a tool of degradation and submission, Hunter used it as a means of taking control and pride. It was just all very well done. Great job, Soren! You should take a lot of pride in what you created here!

1/21/26, 5:41 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Yeah, exploring the role of bottoming and submitting in this story was really fun for me! I redesigned Consummation a bit for this story and made it a world with this sort of... stigma toward being 'easy', submitting too easily, being too slutty. An analogy to toxic masculinity that wasn't about _bottoming_ exactly, just submitting. But because frat warfare is so angled toward topping, the fact that Hunter could best Hawk just by powerbottoming him was humiliating as fuck to Hawk, even if he and the frat didn't verbally recognise it. Hunter realising that 'being a hungry bottom' could also mean 'being a stud' was important for him. Is it the most wholesome ending philosophically? Maybe not, since the expectation is that, to be a 'stud', Hunter has to put the work into powerbottoming--it's an unrealistic expectation for everyone who wants to bottom. But that's just how things are in this world. Either way, it works for _him_. Thanks so much for reading through the whole thing. It was a blast to write and I'm proud of it.