Recent Comments

3/22/23, 7:47 AM
Was thinking about rereading chapter 1 so I was ecstatic to see a second chapter posted! Very sexy seeing the various transformations in a single chapter, and the intensity that the antagonists bring to the story. Eager for more if further chapters are planned! I'd be curious to see what happened to the twins during testing.

3/23/23, 12:17 AM
@[BlondieBoy](/user/show/2505879) Glad you're enjoying it! I'm thinking there's one more chapter left to come, finishing off the story. We'll see what comes out then,...
fry
3/22/23, 9:18 PM
I hope that your story ultimately sees the boys go free and all of the evil men arrested and made to pay for their crimes.

Dylan
3/22/23, 11:17 PM
@fry Is this what happens in reality.... ? Not in "Fate or Coincidence" i'm afraid. But maybe somewere else, while something else is taking place right now ( ?)
3/22/23, 8:36 PM
It _is_ a pretty psychedelic story, no lie, but I truly love it for that. The way the physical world changes around him, the way it feels like we're in a possibly insane person's mind who is trying to defend himself, or if it's real magic... It's very dreamlike. I love it. Also I love your turns of phrase. > man’s birthday suit was nature’s pyjamas Sure are, Daniel, sure are.
pmk
3/22/23, 3:11 AM
Great well-written story! Would love to read more of your work.

3/22/23, 8:02 PM
@[pmk](/user/show/976276) Glad you liked it. Watch this space.
3/22/23, 6:58 PM
Yes love how this is going! It was like I was there serving those feet. So very good ❤️
3/22/23, 1:59 PM
My new favorite story!

3/22/23, 6:08 PM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) LOL thank you sir.
3/22/23, 3:02 PM
What can I say you keep pounding them out with style and heat while we pound along with it *wink*. Congratulations on an amazingly sexy Patreon page as well. Everybody should join it.

3/22/23, 6:07 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thanks bud!
hairyartist
3/22/23, 1:52 PM
thank you for another awesome story!

3/22/23, 6:07 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) Thanks for reading man!
3/22/23, 5:25 PM
The dreamlike quality of this entire story makes this almost a dream-within-a-dream, so basically you're writing Smutception at this point and I'm there for it.
3/22/23, 4:00 PM
Hot.