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Anonymous
3/22/23, 2:30 PM
This was an incredible start! Bate is life bro
Anonymous
3/22/23, 2:19 PM
Would love to see where this goes
3/22/23, 2:04 PM
This was amazing! If someone wanted to do this on himself, could you give us the script? Please?!
3/22/23, 2:02 PM
This story has been fantastic. I was actually relieved when I got to the end of this and read that it wasn’t the last chapter. I was worried that the whole thing would be extremely rushed to finish in time for the contest end. I eagerly await more. The sex in this is nice. I love the idea that Carter’s power made Brook’s dick shrink and grow to fuck him enough to get them both off. I also love their followers rejoicing every time they climax. And I love the stuff going on in the neighborhood outside. More temple building, and then the library nerds showing up to ruin everything. I did wonder how Ig was affected. Was he outside, waiting, jealous? Was he affected by Carter having sex and got off each time they did? Are Carter and Brook going to invite him to join them? Will they have time, with the barbarians at the gates?
3/21/23, 9:37 AM
That was so hot! Nice work!

3/21/23, 8:12 PM
@[SockBoi](/user/show/10010318) Thank you. It's always nice to know other people are turned on by the same sort of things I am.

3/22/23, 1:12 PM
@[Tuhi](/user/show/10035035) You're welcome! Love it when a younger guy takes control - would love for it to happen to me!
3/22/23, 1:05 PM
So hot! I need more, please
3/22/23, 12:12 PM
I wonder if Archie and Grey are still at Eden

3/22/23, 1:01 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) This got asked on the Pateron. This is a prep school, meaning it is just a high school and is for non legacy kids and the ones who weren't vetted like Archie was. Archie and Gray are at the main campus, which is a high school/university complex, two schools on one campus. Since Sammy is new, he hasn't been admitted to the main campus yet, this school is like his test to see if he rates. But Archie and Gray are still at the main Eden...and this story leads to theirs eventually :)
3/22/23, 12:28 PM
Thanks for this wonderful addition. Love where you are taking this.
3/22/23, 4:02 AM
Man. This was incredibly good. Unreliable narrator, mysterious start, and it even got surprisingly sexy at the end when he got dressed. and I loved the office scene.

3/22/23, 12:03 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it! The story sure does get wild :satisfied: